Feedbackplease Stories

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...

life, thoughts. everything summed up into 917 characters. you wouldn't understand much but, let your mind soak up the words and take them to heart just a little bit.

The story of a young girl growing up with her cold hearted mother. Follow her life as she grows up in two different worlds. Her home life and her school life.

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night

First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

Well these are some random sory ideas sitting around in my head so yeah. Tell me what you think! They might even become reality with enough feedback....

-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's en...

just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read thi...

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you...

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!