Feedbackplease Stories

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you who really write the story, the story and opinion you will tell yourself about the topics I write upon in twenty years from now...

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army wages war upon Shane's home.

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night

life, thoughts. everything summed up into 917 characters. you wouldn't understand much but, let your mind soak up the words and take them to heart just a little bit.

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better so they won't be that good for now. If you write poetry and can give feedback please do. Be harsh! I really want to improve my future pieces/ideas. c: About this poem: Past traumatic event that felt like the right thing for you at the time. Being so unaware that it's bad/unhealthy for you mentally. But later protecting those memories because they are what make you who you are. What I would like you to know: I don't care how anyone sees my poems. If it means something different to you that's okay! Take it how you will :)

-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's enemy. But does she really love him? Or does she love her best friend? Find out if she choses to lose Toby for Ryan or if she keeps Toby and passes on Ryan.

just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read this book feedback would be awesome, positive and negative i just want to improve my writing.

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm not sure how good it is anymore. It's "no more than six pages of creative writing consisting of a complete short story". That's the prompt. Plenty to go on, right? UPDATE: I was accepted! Thank you to everyone who read and critiqued it!

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discovered. The story focuses on a shy girl from Pennsylvania who has a very strong opinions about what she believes. In her opinion vampires should be killed and hunted down before they kill all the humans. But she has a change of heart after going through all these events.

My short story on how 6th grade mixed me up.

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?