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Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...

The story of a young girl growing up with her cold hearted mother. Follow her life as she grows up in two different worlds. Her home life and her school life.

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you...

In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...

First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

This is a fantasy story about a boy living in a land ruled by a tyrant. Poverty, and crime are rampant in the streets and he took to stealing for survival but gets caugh...

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...