Feedbacks Stories

"You know something! Just-" He scoffed in impatience, curling in on himself slowly, "God, Pomni. I- I just-" Pomni rested her hand on his shoulder, easing him of his greater tension as his legs sat agape. The jester sighed, "I know you've lost some pretty important people here," the jester looked as Jax crossed his arms. "Look, I get that you're trying to forget about this, but that's probably the worst that you can do." Jax scowled at Pomni, "What do you know?" He paused, getting up and walking forwards slightly, "You know nothing about me. You know nothing about this place you just got here." "I know that, but-" Jax looked at the jester, his pupils small only to frighten Pomni. "You don't know Zooble, you don't know Ragatha and what she's done, you don't know Kaufmo, and you didn't-" he swallowed bitterly, pointing at Pomni and getting rather close only to back off, "you didn't know Ribbit." ---- we're so back GAAANG !!!!! this story is mostly about jax coping through ribbit and kaufmo's abstraction and then pomni is there to help !!! her helping kiiinda turns into them dating but that's besides the point... you guys are only here for the chill fellas lore.. obviously. this fanifc has motifs, so PLEEEASE enjoy my masterpiece, my life's work, and understand that this is not canon and i don't own these characters or show ! thank you thank you !!! this updates EVERY WEDNESDAYYYY !!!!!! i also tweak out about their progressing relationship after every chapter ^^ Warnings: Digitalized-gore Mentions of self-harm Mentions and implications of sex Self Sabotage Jax Cover art by me !

A book club in which members are placed in teams called guilds, where they then work to give extensive feedback and win the victory!

this is a place for honest, constructive critiques-no sugarcoating, but no tearing down either. if you're looking for feedback on your plot, characters, pacing, or anything in between, i got you. let's make your story the best it can be.

"𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐮𝐬 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐠𝐨 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐰𝐞 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐲 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐰𝐞 𝐚𝐫𝐞." - 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐨𝐧 𝐂𝐨𝐨𝐥𝐞𝐲 All of us know the importance of books, don't we? An escape from reality, a friend, a teacher, and a dream we hold in our hands. Reading a book brings joy, but that feeling of pure enthusiasm when you discuss it with a friend cannot be replaced by anything. Books and Celestine, both are about inner peace and quiet space. So here we are, The Gemme Community, with our Celestine Club. With the objective of bringing writers and readers together, this book club will serve as a place where you get to give and take recommendations, read, discuss, make friends, and most importantly, improve! Join in, and let yourself shine like the true gem you are! Cover by: SantanartEN Rules by: Author_Ankita

(OPEN) Whiskers and Writing is all about cats and books! Functions like most book clubs, but with a few occasional twists and turns. We're all about relaxing, having fun, and talking with new people! You don't have to love cats or own cats to join this club, all you need is to love writing and reading on Wattpad😸. (Cats and clans are just fun additions, not affecting how the club works really) (P. S please spread the club! Greatly appreciated:)) Discord for club (not required): in my account bio ~ Founder, Evangeline🩷

This is my story status board where I keep track of all my series, one-shots, and future ideas. Some may be active, on hold, or just concepts waiting to be written. Feel free to comment if you'd like to see an idea come to life.

ミ★ 𝐎𝐩𝐞𝐧 ★彡 Du wolltest schon immer mal bei einem Covercontest teilnehmen, hast Dich aber nie getraut? Oder suchst Du nach neuen Herausforderungen und willst Dich mit anderen messen, hast aber keinen guten Contest gefunden? Wenn Du nach der Möglichkeit suchst, ein ehrliches und konstruktives Feedback zu Deinen Covern zu erhalten, dann ist dieser Contest genau die Chance für Dich. Ich gestalte unterschiedliche Runden mit spannenden und abwechslungsreichen Themen. Hast Du Lust bekommen? Dann melde Dich gerne in der derzeitigen offenen Runde an.

I wrote this book because I've spent years watching intelligent, capable professionals struggle with the same communication challenges over and over again. Not because they're not smart enough. Not because they don't care enough. But because nobody ever taught them the fundamental principles of how communication actually works in groups. They were thrown into teams and told to collaborate. Told to "communicate better." Told to "work together." But nobody explained what that actually means. Nobody gave them a framework for understanding why groups succeed or fail. Nobody taught them that communication isn't just about sending clear messages-it's about constructing social realities together. So they default to trial and error. They rely on instinct. They copy what they've seen other people do, even when those people were doing it wrong. And the cycle continues.

A club for those seeking serious feedback/critiques. It works on a pairing-based system, and you may stay with a pairing if both of you wish. See inside for further details!

Do you have an ONC? Wish to get feedback as well as discover other ONCs? Then stop by and join our ONC book club!

[OPEN] Astania's book club for those in search of a structured format and constructive feedback. Sign up to be placed in bi-weekly pairings, where you'll read six chapters and exchange extensive comments! See our profile for other book clubs!

DISCLAIMER: These review/critique things are based on first impressions. I will NOT be reading the entirety of your book. My purpose is to urge my clients to learn something new about their story. (Though opinions may vary across participants.) Maybe your review from me will be the catalyst that makes you quit writing for a period of time. Maybe my review is the confidence boost you need in order to take that next step. Maybe my review will help you see your errors and better yourself. Maybe it will do nothing to help you at all and you'll just think of me as a turd after. My goal is not to tell you how to think; I am just a milk dud trying to do something semi-productive as I procrastinate away. Also, in no way am I implying that I am a superior writer to any of my clients, I'm just bored & have attained a decent critical eye on picking out "the bad", I think. We all have written garbage before (you might be writing one right now and have yet to realize it! Who knows-- let me help you find out!), this is just a process that has been done a googolplex amount of times throughout the centuries and the multiverse. This is not unique to only you. It is just a cycle, and you are part of it, which is why I am here to shove you along in one tiny portion of it. If you think that I'm a "rude bitch", all of this seems too intimidating, or maybe even melodramatic--I get it. To a certain extent, I even agree with you! You know yourself better than I do. Remember: no one is forcing you to request and I'll have less reviews to get to. 🤷🏾♂️ {P.S. Super depressed and poor so I'm prone to take breaks. Oops. Edit: On an indefinite hiatus if that isn't obvious. All posted reviews have pretty helpful info in them I like to think tho!} Okay, I'll quit the foreplay and get on with it. I hope you enjoy my services whether you request or not! (Cover done by yours truly)

I always wanted to do a literary audit

For all the broken souls who love Poetry. Snippet from "I Miss Him" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I try to unbreak what is broken Until I realise it was broke before you ever came I hate most men Yet, I just can't hate you Those nights I try to remember who she was I try to love what she loved Until I realize what she loved included you

Sasha Ross. The actress loved by the entire nation. All of your favorite 80s movies, she was in them. Read about her life, movies, relationships, friendships, and co-stars. Including, Wil Wheaton, River Phoenix, Corey Haim, Corey Feldman, Jonathan Brandis, and Leonardo DiCaprio. As amazing as her life sounds there are definitely obstacles. See Sasha transform and go through all of the difficulties life throws at her. What makes her americas sweetheart? What is it that draws everybody in?

Visualize healing in words??? This isn't a full story. It's me testing a concept of my voice. The chapters don't follow a plot - They're just pieces of something I'm trying to figure out. If you read it - and make you feel something. Please let me know. That's all I'm after<3

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Whether you're looking for a review, a critique, or a beta reader, Cadence Book Reviews is open to all of it. Check inside for details, requests, schedule, and reports. Some of the options require no payment at all, including five chapter critiques. These reviews may be featured on the Cadence Book Reviews YouTube series later on with creative, honest, and positive growth-focused feedback. Summer Services: {Listed this way for my benefit.} May 4 - May 18 OPEN May 19 - June 26 OPEN June 27 - June 28 OPEN June 29 - Aug 7 OPEN Aug 8 - Aug 31 OPEN - Critique - Creative suggestions for plot and characters. 5 Chapter Critique, done by weekend or following week 10/20 Chap Critique, done in 2-4 weeks Whole Story, 20 or fewer chapters, 2-4 weeks Whole Story, ###, ###, negotiable details - Review - A creative, positive review to place on your description or story. Whole books only, everything negotiable

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