Ffwriting Stories

In the quaint town of Eldergrove, Elara was known for her striking heterochromia-one eye a deep, warm brown and the other an ethereal blue. Despite her captivating appearance, she felt an unshakeable void in her heart, a sense that something vital was missing from her life. Every night, Elara was visited by dreams of a mysterious boy-tall, with raven-black hair and eyes that shone with an intensity that felt achingly familiar. They laughed and danced in her dreams, but each time their connection deepened, the dream would abruptly fade, leaving her disoriented and yearning. Desperate for answers, Elara sought out the town's enigmatic astrologer. The wise woman revealed a stunning truth: this boy was her soulmate from a past life, a mighty warrior who had died in battle while she had been a radiant princess with beautiful blue eyes. The heartbreak of his loss had shattered her soul, binding them across time. . Soo actually I am kinda new here.. It's my first story, so I would really appreciate if you guys point out the mistakes in my writings and correct me.. Also if you're comfortable with this story then only read otherwise it's fine just leave it.. And ye enjoy reading..