Firstbite Stories

Have you ever heard the old saying, "Don't talk to strangers?" One day when visiting the Musée d'Orsay in Paris, an American tourist learns why this adage is still very true. Be certain to let me know in the comments section what you think of this bit of flash fiction. Is this story any good? Should I keep on writing and develop it further, or discard it?

Ash woods is a vampire. Ash lives his vampire life in peace well as peaceful as being a vampire can be! But one day his world changes as a school in the neighbouring town burns down and the pupils have to work at his school. Oh yeah Did I mention there's a group of werewolves at the other school!!!!!!! Just a short story cause I'm to lazy to write a massive one

This is about a young girl who got bit by a wolf