mommyzeus
Alright, I've been editing this binch for about a year or so and kept making changes only to go back and change it yet again. I'm gonna try and just stick to what I have down, even if I don't like it, and will try and update this once the editing is all done. And for the future, I guess I'll write down what I can and if I have a beta reader available, it'll be more polished.
I know not a lot of people read or care about this but I havent exactly tried my best either so... hopefully its better than my 8th grade writing (which was what the original was)
for the love of héck, point out mistakes. grammarly can't catch plot holes and I don't have premium anyway.