Garystu Stories

oc reviews (CLOSED)

𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒 : 𝐂𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐃 So, what is your OC like? Are they realistic and original, or cliché and overpowered? In this book, I'll review your OC, and show you if they're good or bad!

**No longer accepting submissions It's the Hundredth Hunger Games, also known as the Fourth Quarter Quell, so what's the twist? Well, only the more perfect, beautiful, and enrapturing girls can be eligible to be Reaped: The Mary-Sues! With an arena full of the perfect, how could there possibly be a victor crowned? Well, we'll just have to see about that! But, the more views, votes, and reviews I get, the more painfully they will die! How wonderful is that? And to make everything even more dandy, Gary-Stus from the Capitol are submitting themselves for the Games! Wow! In review: There will be twenty four Sues and twelve Stus! Thirty five gory, horrible deaths of the people we hate? And for FREE? Now THAT'S a bargain! Cover by illyna16

First there was one prophesy. Then, two more, and like a crop of warts, prophesy's began to cover the planet, until almost every single human was destined to unlimited power and saving the world. Notice 'Almost'. Meet Gary. Gary Stu. Ironically enough, he is the only human on earth that's actually normal, and has no powers or abilities at all. But, with all these people, and all this power, wars have begun to break out. Everyone seems to think that they're absolutely perfect in every way. Now, Gary must try to fight his way through the chaos and put an end to whatever's doing this, so he can live a normal life with normal people.

WARNING: This story is to make fun of all of the Mary sues. Please don't murdle me

Disclaimer: Keep in mind that this is just MY opinions. If you disagree, that's okay. You're completely entitled to your own opinion. The title is pretty self explanatory. Just know, I am NOT a complete expert. I feel as if some of my OCs are Mary Sues, if not, just very overused. I just know some stuff is very basic and you can be super creative if you try to! :) Btw, the fandoms I'll be covering the most are creepypasta, undertale, and warrior cats, but really this goes for any ocs.

I'll do reviews of people's oc's. All you have to do is send them to me and I'll give you feedback on how to improve your character. I do multiple fandoms. CAN YOU GUYS TELL ME WHEN I MAKE A FREAKING GRAMMAR MISTAKE? it's embarrassing when it's left there for a while

Bad Oc creation has probably been one of the disturbances people would find on the internet for whatever reason. It could be its overpowered nature, overdone design, terrible backstory, nonsensical description/personality, or any of that sort. This guide will hopefully help people planning on making OCs to make them doable for their fandom not be ashamed of them.

Welcome fellow RWBY fans, hope y'all can benefit from this in some way or another.

I'm not going to tell you you can't make your oc an uchiha. I won't tell you that an incredibly pretty oc is cliche (it's an anime fanfiction, everyone is good looking.) It really doesn't matter if you want to make your oc an overpowered ninja (naruto is one and people still like him). This is an actual guide on how to make a realistic naruto based original character, no matter what kekkei genkai you give them or how many people are in love with them. I'm focusing mainly on how to make your character seem as believable as possible.

***Highest #101 in humor(03/03/17)*** *** #1 in cliches (19 june'18)*** Who doesn't love a cliche? Me. Thus, this entire book will be about those damn cliches you see floating around a sea of wattpad books:) *intensifies* ~Includes~ -cringey mc types -cliche rants -pet peeves of mine -opinions -sarcastic author -the ironic fact that this cliche rant book itself is a cliche

Just a couple of short stories around the Valley Cats and some other fanclans that I created, some of them are old projects, some of them are projections of irl situations and some of them are stories I write when I'm absolutely bored and have nothing better to do :> [🦋] - FanClan Oneshot [🪽] - Valley Cats Oneshot [❄️] - Projection/Vent Fic [💧] - Old Drafts [🐟] - Crack/Mary Sue Slander

Message me your oc's and I'll give you some advice on them!

I felt that Wattpad may have needed this little book.

I will rate: Undertale Doki Doki Literature Club Warrior Cats Buffy/Angel Disney/Pixar Fran Bow / Little Misfortune Dollhouse FNAF Star Trek(TOS, TNG, DS9, Picard) Harry Potter Sherlock Minecraft (if people do that) Non-Fandom OCs Joke OCs (Please tell me it is a joke. Don't make me worry.) The format can vary, but the basic format would be: Full name: Nickname + reason(if applicable): Age: Sex: Gender: Sexuality: Relationship status: If in a relationship or crushing, with who?: Species: Skin color: Hair color: Hairstyle: Eye color: Other looks: Family: Backstory: If anything doesn't make sense for your character (eg, Skin tone for a pony), just don't do it. If I didn't put something you want to add, or thing should be added, just add it in. For example, if a Warriors Oc, please add things like rank, mate, kits, etc.

im bored so...reviews...huzzah. i'll try my best to help you with your oc, or point out the mary sue/gary stu in your oc

NOTE: These topics contain major and minor spoilers as well as multiple sources (manga, comics, books ,tv etc) Me giving my opinion on some things, and a few rants. As I sit in a room with the smell of jasmine tea filling the work space, I decided I wanted to delve into the world of rants and critique. I am by no means a professional; and although I have been writing for a while, I still have a lot to learn. These are just my opinions on some things I have been wanting to discuss for a while. So let's dive in, shall we?

Mary Sue was a just a hot basic white girl nerd who's supposed to be the Valedictorian of her class or something but will make some of the stupidest choices possible in this horrible book all for him...the extremely hot bad boy...GARY STU! OMG BECUZ HE'S GORGEOUS LOL! TEXT SPEAK! TEXT SPEAK EVERYWHERE EVERY SENSIBLE PERSON SHOULD ABSOLUTELY DESPISE THIS SAD EXCUSE FOR A STORY BEFORE THEY EVEN READ IT LOL! FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS IN THIS GOD AWFUL "BOOK" BY READING IT DESPITE HOW PAINFULLY OBVIOUS I MADE IT!

Crappy to mediocre art created by me.

Do you need some 'professional' advice on your new OC? Well good luck because I am here to help. Just full out the forum and I'll review it! I created a slogan for this; BAM! And the Sue is gone ;)