Garystu قصص

This is really just a book for Creepypasta OC advice and OC reviews! Chapter requests are very much welcome and encouraged as well.

Two main OCs that are probably very Mary Sue-esque. I'M SORRY I'M TRYING ALSO I APPARENTLY REALLY LIKE BIRDS

(Note: This book is supposed to be terrible. It is meant for humor purposes and is in no way shape or form related to my other books) This was all made out of procrastination Bad things are happening to valleyclan! Cats are dying and everyone is sad :( Who will save them??? I ain't finishing this shit lmao

𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒 : 𝐂𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐃 So, what is your OC like? Are they realistic and original, or cliché and overpowered? In this book, I'll review your OC, and show you if they're good or bad!

***Highest #101 in humor(03/03/17)*** *** #1 in cliches (19 june'18)*** Who doesn't love a cliche? Me. Thus, this entire book will be about those damn cliches you see floating around a sea of wattpad books:) *intensifies* ~Includes~ -cringey mc types -cliche rants -pet peeves of mine -opinions -sarcastic author -the ironic fact that this cliche rant book itself is a cliche

Submit a form on your OC and I'll see if they are a Mary Sue. I'm not a professional Oc Judger and my opinions might differ from yours, but I hope you learn something about your Oc from this!

Tips on how to improve common problems with original characters! I've noticed that there are many reoccurring issues with oc's... so I'm here to give some pointers on how to make your original character better! There will be some chapters that are just references and explanations

Hi, welcome to my review book.

I will rate: Undertale Doki Doki Literature Club Warrior Cats Buffy/Angel Disney/Pixar Fran Bow / Little Misfortune Dollhouse FNAF Star Trek(TOS, TNG, DS9, Picard) Harry Potter Sherlock Minecraft (if people do that) Non-Fandom OCs Joke OCs (Please tell me it is a joke. Don't make me worry.) The format can vary, but the basic format would be: Full name: Nickname + reason(if applicable): Age: Sex: Gender: Sexuality: Relationship status: If in a relationship or crushing, with who?: Species: Skin color: Hair color: Hairstyle: Eye color: Other looks: Family: Backstory: If anything doesn't make sense for your character (eg, Skin tone for a pony), just don't do it. If I didn't put something you want to add, or thing should be added, just add it in. For example, if a Warriors Oc, please add things like rank, mate, kits, etc.

NOTE: These topics contain major and minor spoilers as well as multiple sources (manga, comics, books ,tv etc) Me giving my opinion on some things, and a few rants. As I sit in a room with the smell of jasmine tea filling the work space, I decided I wanted to delve into the world of rants and critique. I am by no means a professional; and although I have been writing for a while, I still have a lot to learn. These are just my opinions on some things I have been wanting to discuss for a while. So let's dive in, shall we?

oc reviews (CLOSED)

I'll do reviews of people's oc's. All you have to do is send them to me and I'll give you feedback on how to improve your character. I do multiple fandoms. CAN YOU GUYS TELL ME WHEN I MAKE A FREAKING GRAMMAR MISTAKE? it's embarrassing when it's left there for a while

Read the title

Witajcie zagubieni poszukiwacze wolności od przewidywalnych opowiadań, Mary Sue i Garego Stu. W tym dziele postaramy się tego uniknąć. Przedstawiamy całkowite przeciwieństwo wyimaginowanego przez aŁtoreczki świata.

Sometimes, we come across those characters who are just too perfect. The ones who are overpowered, oversexualized, undermines the characters, and/or breaks canon. This is where I will review these characters. I'll criticizing these Mary Sues/Gary Stus, and at the end, I'll say where the creators can improve on them. (WARNING: Please do not harass the creators of these characters. No one deserves harassment.)

You see that terrible cover? That's a gliche cover. You see that title? It says it all. But I'm still gonna tell you what it is in case some people can't read the titles. It's a book where I write the gliche and cringe warriors fanfiction stuff. Since I haven't read all of the Warrior Cats books I have to write with my own characters and Clans. I mean. I know NOTHING of the new characters. I know their names but... Who the frick are they? I'm just gonna create some random Mary Sue/ Gary Stu characters or then Abused kids- you get the point- and create gliche stories with them. Probably will include bad grammar and wrong comma places if I can make myself. And then I will review the shit I wrote and fix it. If I wanna. I might just write some crap, publish and then live my life. I'm not teaching ya'all how to write. I'm just showing how hilariously stupid some fanfics are. Was Starkit's phropercy actually meant to be a serious book? Like. Really? Can't type properly because ma computah refuses to let me add some letters.

I judge your ocs like how could you not know? It's in the title