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Just a couple of short stories around the Valley Cats and some other fanclans that I created, some of them are old projects, some of them are projections of irl situations and some of them are stories I write when I'm absolutely bored and have nothing better to do :> [🦋] - FanClan Oneshot [🪽] - Valley Cats Oneshot [❄️] - Projection/Vent Fic [💧] - Old Drafts [🐟] - Crack/Mary Sue Slander

This is really just a book for Creepypasta OC advice and OC reviews! Chapter requests are very much welcome and encouraged as well.

Two main OCs that are probably very Mary Sue-esque. I'M SORRY I'M TRYING ALSO I APPARENTLY REALLY LIKE BIRDS

I felt that Wattpad may have needed this little book.

I will rate: Undertale Doki Doki Literature Club Warrior Cats Buffy/Angel Disney/Pixar Fran Bow / Little Misfortune Dollhouse FNAF Star Trek(TOS, TNG, DS9, Picard) Harry Potter Sherlock Minecraft (if people do that) Non-Fandom OCs Joke OCs (Please tell me it is a joke. Don't make me worry.) The format can vary, but the basic format would be: Full name: Nickname + reason(if applicable): Age: Sex: Gender: Sexuality: Relationship status: If in a relationship or crushing, with who?: Species: Skin color: Hair color: Hairstyle: Eye color: Other looks: Family: Backstory: If anything doesn't make sense for your character (eg, Skin tone for a pony), just don't do it. If I didn't put something you want to add, or thing should be added, just add it in. For example, if a Warriors Oc, please add things like rank, mate, kits, etc.

Welcome fellow RWBY fans, hope y'all can benefit from this in some way or another.

oc reviews (CLOSED)

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Are you worried that your OC is a Mary/Gary sue? Or do you feel like your OC needs improvement? Well, you've come to the right place, just fill out the form and I'll give your OC an honest review! I'll have to warn you, I might not go easy on you I'll be reviewing OCs from the following fandoms Original fandoms Sonic Warrior cats Wings of fire Teen titans Hetalia Undertale FNAF (More might be added) Note: it may take a while to do each review, so please be patient. Also, If you get a bad review, don't complain, please fix it

𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒 : 𝐂𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐃 So, what is your OC like? Are they realistic and original, or cliché and overpowered? In this book, I'll review your OC, and show you if they're good or bad!

(Highest ranking #2 in marysue) [previously titled "marysue roasts"] *warning* If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!! Basically, you can send me whatever you want and I'll do a rating/rant/give my opinion on it:)) but don't worry you still can send me ocs to rate Examples of things you can send: Ratings: ocs, book, au etc... Rant:anything cringe worthy Opinion: anything really(fandoms,idk food???)

I hope to share my advice of characters with you or help you with anything OC related. Which also includes making some. This shop is CLOSED! I can do original and fandom characters.

I'll do reviews of people's oc's. All you have to do is send them to me and I'll give you feedback on how to improve your character. I do multiple fandoms. CAN YOU GUYS TELL ME WHEN I MAKE A FREAKING GRAMMAR MISTAKE? it's embarrassing when it's left there for a while

This is basically a review book. I'm not the most popular user (not by a long shot) but I'd like to help people make better OCs and stay away from the horror of Mary Sues! This book is not in any way meant to be a hate book, I just want to help you guys make better characters and therefore better stories. I will do the following fandoms. - Percy Jackson/Heroes of Olympus - Harry Potter - Warriors - MLP - The Lunar Chronicles - The Kane Chronicles - Steven Universe - Hunger Games - Divergent - Star Wars - Original Stories - Joke Sues If you have another fandom not listed, please ask me. I may have forgotten to list some. Also, if the character is from an original story, please explain the background/context of that story. I will rate your character based on what you've listed and suggest things to add to their profile or take away. I will not cuss at you for a Mary Sue but I will try and help you fix it! Anyways, either comment on one of the chapters or message me if you have a character you'd like me to review.g

I will review your OC's whenever I have the will too

Message me your oc's and I'll give you some advice on them!

Witajcie zagubieni poszukiwacze wolności od przewidywalnych opowiadań, Mary Sue i Garego Stu. W tym dziele postaramy się tego uniknąć. Przedstawiamy całkowite przeciwieństwo wyimaginowanego przez aŁtoreczki świata.

What to avoid in in the process of making a good oc.

Its the time I do the scanner I want creepypasta creepy again not all lovey dovey and cringey and not creepy or scary ok and then these is my sides opinion some are mine the nice ones are mine but the others are my sides or my siblings ok thats all.

Hi, welcome to my review book.