Givefeedback Stories

The feelings i am feeling is in my poems, feel free to read and tell me what you think of them. They are the honest truth and i cant wait for you to read so i can tell you.

Kayla's ex boyfriend Kyle was always high on drugs and not giving a care in the world about her but her Bestfriend Jake was there to help her pick up the pieces but could she ever think of Jake as more than a friend? This is my first published book so tell me what you think and if you think I should carry on,many thanks -Olivia x

Patient 0820 was abandoned by her mother at an experimental science hospital to be tested on. When she discovers what they have done to patients in the past she is determined to escape their grasp.

This is a small "story" somewhat made up, but also real experiences of feelings and thoughts.

Uuhhh help me out!! I kinda want to improve and expand the info about my Ocs...so just comment your ideas!! Please and thank you!!

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

A girl Lilly who's just your average high school student, what happens when she sees something she shouldn't have and ends up being forced into a gang with vampires.

The story is about two sister who never got along, finally seeing each other and it did not turn out so well. The more you get into the story, you will see how lies can break and destroy people, and how secrets unfold.

These are my screw it notes. When something goes down in my life I write about it. So this one is for my ex guy best friend.

Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Psychopath ready to devour her like a predator and she is calm ,smart and Independent girl Running from him as a Rabbit... who will get what it in the end... is there fate will lead them to forever together or end up in something else???? let's read and get to know...

Sanji x fem!reader~ Sanji takes you to in after you're involved in an accident.

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me what you think. Should I finish? Or is it a total waste of time? You decide. Thank you.

Willow is gay. Like super gay. How is she supposed to tell your rude father and Gay Pride rioting mother?

This story is about Emma Johnson struggles in life and how she over comes them.

hi! this is my first time publishing my work and this is just what i have of the storyline and i would love to hear your ideas and feedback i know its not that good but i hope you can help! :)

Alphonse who goes by Al is a 15 year old boy that transfers schools halfway through the year. Follow the story to see how he blends in with everyone else [Im doing this to get objective feedback on my writing skills to improve. Once i writd more ill probably change the description and title]

The main character is wandering around in the woods to find a old man guarding a cave warning the kid saying not to enter. The kid ignores the old man and goes in anyway.. only to realize the mistake that the made.

A futuristic description of how the world will decay from the point of view of a person embracing the outcome of her world. Even though the oil spill that ruined her air, dirt, and water threatens her life, she is content to run blindly into death.

Ms. Ellen is the most mysterious teacher in the school. Seven middle school student were heading up to their first period with her. The bell rang yet there was no sign of her. They soon realize they aren't in school anymore and they have to find out the truth about their teacher. With help from elemental forces and cool new transformations, can they be able to make it out of this living nightmare?