Givefeedback Stories

Starting highschool can be either very great or hourendous. This is a story in which you follow four soon to be friend, all with different likes and personalitys, as they enter a year full of surprises. This story contains many typical and non-typical scenarios. This is my first story so I hope you all enjoy!

A girl named Hana (Me) shared stories in her middle school experience. (Things get complicated) With the help of her friends Ariana, Eliana, and Mia.

A princess on a mission to kill her father. A guard who will forever follow the princess. A Queen who will never be a mother.

wip of a random story that's probably moving way too fast

Courtney moves back to her birthplace, England

Hey hope you enjoyed this "series" and please give me feedback about it thank you

This story is about Emma Johnson struggles in life and how she over comes them.

The story is about two sister who never got along, finally seeing each other and it did not turn out so well. The more you get into the story, you will see how lies can break and destroy people, and how secrets unfold.

Alphonse who goes by Al is a 15 year old boy that transfers schools halfway through the year. Follow the story to see how he blends in with everyone else [Im doing this to get objective feedback on my writing skills to improve. Once i writd more ill probably change the description and title]

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A futuristic description of how the world will decay from the point of view of a person embracing the outcome of her world. Even though the oil spill that ruined her air, dirt, and water threatens her life, she is content to run blindly into death.

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me what you think. Should I finish? Or is it a total waste of time? You decide. Thank you.

A short poem about love finding you

Ms. Ellen is the most mysterious teacher in the school. Seven middle school student were heading up to their first period with her. The bell rang yet there was no sign of her. They soon realize they aren't in school anymore and they have to find out the truth about their teacher. With help from elemental forces and cool new transformations, can they be able to make it out of this living nightmare?

Angel, Ariana,and Asia are just three normal girls. They just finished their middle school years and summer break is almost over. High school is just one week away. They can't wait to start because being a freshman is super exciting. But something big is gonna happen! What you might ask? Well Take a look into their lives and follow along with them and see! Trust me you don't wanna miss this! (This is my first story guys please comment and tell me your thoughts!)

Deceit has been going through so much pain, he just wants to end it but he can't die. He was all for cutting until the others found out... (art not mine apart from the cover) Most recently updated: ???? October 2020, added new part (forgot to update the desc lol)

Just gonna have to fins out yourself!!!