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I'm going to try and make up my own, but take my ideas from tumblr. feedback would be great, I need to know whether I'm wasting my time or not! have a read and let me know, thanks x

In the city of Lindoria, a group of college friends' lives take an extraordinary turn when they discover they possess superhuman abilities. As they navigate the complexities of their newfound powers, their bonds are tested in unexpected ways. The story unfolds through 40 chapters, each delving deeper into the challenges and triumphs of these friends. Their journey is marked by betrayals that shake the foundations of their unity, confrontations with formidable antagonists, and the ultimate sacrifices they make to protect their city. Throughout the story, they are guided by a character named Lily, whose unwavering hope and resilience inspire them to face adversity. As they grapple with loss, deception, and internal struggles, the group finds strength in their experiences, even as they face haunting shadows from their past. They must make decisions about trust and forgiveness, learn the true meaning of sacrifice, and ultimately confront a powerful antagonist whose identity remains hidden until the climax. With themes of friendship, redemption, and resilience, "Awakened Unity" is a captivating tale that explores the complexities of human emotions and the enduring strength of bonds that can overcome even the darkest of trials. This story will take you on an emotional rollercoaster, from the highs of friendship and hope to the lows of betrayal and grief, and ultimately to the triumph of unity in the face of adversity.

The main character is wandering around in the woods to find a old man guarding a cave warning the kid saying not to enter. The kid ignores the old man and goes in anyway.. only to realize the mistake that the made.

A girl Lilly who's just your average high school student, what happens when she sees something she shouldn't have and ends up being forced into a gang with vampires.

wip of a random story that's probably moving way too fast

Patient 0820 was abandoned by her mother at an experimental science hospital to be tested on. When she discovers what they have done to patients in the past she is determined to escape their grasp.

Far away, in a world where only the chosen ones get the power of the stars. Esiora. Where the sea is full of mysteries and adventures. There on the planet Esiora at a small island, lived a girl. From young age did she dream of something very big, something where people would laugh at her and say it's impossible. 'But how could it be impossible, if I didn't try it yet', said the little girl. As she stated that sentence she promised that she will not ever give up on that dream, on that 'impossible' dream.

This is a small "story" somewhat made up, but also real experiences of feelings and thoughts.

it's about being drunk and making mistakes

This is a true story on what's happening to me of someone who likes me. The thing is I'm not sure who it is.

Deceit has been going through so much pain, he just wants to end it but he can't die. He was all for cutting until the others found out... (art not mine apart from the cover) Most recently updated: ???? October 2020, added new part (forgot to update the desc lol)

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me what you think. Should I finish? Or is it a total waste of time? You decide. Thank you.

Hey hope you enjoyed this "series" and please give me feedback about it thank you

Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Psychopath ready to devour her like a predator and she is calm ,smart and Independent girl Running from him as a Rabbit... who will get what it in the end... is there fate will lead them to forever together or end up in something else???? let's read and get to know...

This is my first story and I can't draw to save my life. This is about my OC's experiences at UA in Japan !

The beginning ( I guess)

Give me feed back please. What happens though the eyes of each child and mother. A mother may not see everything unlike a child.