Givemefeedback Stories

Percy is flunking and living his best life. Annabeth is acing everything except for the annoying 'working with other people' part. What happens when these two opposites are paired together? Story originally from Percabeth Oneshots, another book by nootfreakinnoot. None of the art is mine. I hope you enjoy, lovelies

Just some ideas that I come up with.

A princess on a mission to kill her father. A guard who will forever follow the princess. A Queen who will never be a mother.

Uuhhh help me out!! I kinda want to improve and expand the info about my Ocs...so just comment your ideas!! Please and thank you!!

The feelings i am feeling is in my poems, feel free to read and tell me what you think of them. They are the honest truth and i cant wait for you to read so i can tell you.

it's about being drunk and making mistakes

Anybody loves to travel, But for jaycee it was way too much until she meets the person who changes her life forever.

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

wip of a random story that's probably moving way too fast

Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Psychopath ready to devour her like a predator and she is calm ,smart and Independent girl Running from him as a Rabbit... who will get what it in the end... is there fate will lead them to forever together or end up in something else???? let's read and get to know...

This is a story I wrote as a stress reliever a while ago, I decided to pick it up again. As it goes currently, it follows from two characters perspectives. One perspective is your POV, while the other is from Iden, your... "acquaintance." Enjoy party goers and bored people, have fun and give me feedback to tell me if I should continue or not. ~L

The beginning ( I guess)

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me what you think. Should I finish? Or is it a total waste of time? You decide. Thank you.

just dabble poems that I think of

hi! this is my first time publishing my work and this is just what i have of the storyline and i would love to hear your ideas and feedback i know its not that good but i hope you can help! :)

This is a small "story" somewhat made up, but also real experiences of feelings and thoughts.

A futuristic description of how the world will decay from the point of view of a person embracing the outcome of her world. Even though the oil spill that ruined her air, dirt, and water threatens her life, she is content to run blindly into death.

just me posting some of my poems, any (constructive) feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!! I own all content in this book as it is all my original work, including the story cover, photos and other artwork. do not repost or use without my express permission.

This story is about Emma Johnson struggles in life and how she over comes them.