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Zanny

This is a random story I got bored and created this. Make sure to leave comments and tune in.

Uuhhh help me out!! I kinda want to improve and expand the info about my Ocs...so just comment your ideas!! Please and thank you!!

This story is basically one shots of a story that I've been working on. First chapter is the basic world-building, description for the story, characters, and all that jazz. Would like to get feedback on these oneshots. What you think is good, what you think could be improved, what should be taken out completely, something should be explained more(remember, these are just oneshots), what you think of the story idea as a whole and ect. I might even let some people have some side characters in the story, who knows. (Don't hold me to that😂)

Courtney moves back to her birthplace, England

Orochi Tempest is a typical worker drone, wake up, snack, work, drink, work, dinner, work and sleep. But when his life takes a sudden turn when he falls asleep and wakes up in a realm unknown to him except for pictures and clips, his once shackled soul is free to grow untamed.

This story is about Emma Johnson struggles in life and how she over comes them.

just me posting some of my poems, any (constructive) feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!! I own all content in this book as it is all my original work, including the story cover, photos and other artwork. do not repost or use without my express permission.

Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Psychopath ready to devour her like a predator and she is calm ,smart and Independent girl Running from him as a Rabbit... who will get what it in the end... is there fate will lead them to forever together or end up in something else???? let's read and get to know...

it's about being drunk and making mistakes

This is a story I wrote as a stress reliever a while ago, I decided to pick it up again. As it goes currently, it follows from two characters perspectives. One perspective is your POV, while the other is from Iden, your... "acquaintance." Enjoy party goers and bored people, have fun and give me feedback to tell me if I should continue or not. ~L

Jane just wants to be a normal kid... but after what happened last summer, its hard to be normal. She has to face the bullys, her mom's fiance, and the jerk friends.. When her mom and new dad dissapear, Jane and her friends go on a adventure to find them, she realizes that she's not as bad as she seems.

Far away, in a world where only the chosen ones get the power of the stars. Esiora. Where the sea is full of mysteries and adventures. There on the planet Esiora at a small island, lived a girl. From young age did she dream of something very big, something where people would laugh at her and say it's impossible. 'But how could it be impossible, if I didn't try it yet', said the little girl. As she stated that sentence she promised that she will not ever give up on that dream, on that 'impossible' dream.

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A short poem about love finding you

This story is about a teenager who stays to herself and looks at life with a different point of view.... Well in her mind at least! She's a young women trying to find herself and make a way of her own in this crazy world, although she will be hit with very hard and traumatic experiences... Will she give up? Or will she stand alone and fight to make it to where she finally wants to be in life?

Starting highschool can be either very great or hourendous. This is a story in which you follow four soon to be friend, all with different likes and personalitys, as they enter a year full of surprises. This story contains many typical and non-typical scenarios. This is my first story so I hope you all enjoy!

A futuristic description of how the world will decay from the point of view of a person embracing the outcome of her world. Even though the oil spill that ruined her air, dirt, and water threatens her life, she is content to run blindly into death.

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me what you think. Should I finish? Or is it a total waste of time? You decide. Thank you.