Givemefeedback Stories

In the city of Lindoria, a group of college friends' lives take an extraordinary turn when they discover they possess superhuman abilities. As they navigate the complexities of their newfound powers, their bonds are tested in unexpected ways. The story unfolds through 40 chapters, each delving deeper into the challenges and triumphs of these friends. Their journey is marked by betrayals that shake the foundations of their unity, confrontations with formidable antagonists, and the ultimate sacrifices they make to protect their city. Throughout the story, they are guided by a character named Lily, whose unwavering hope and resilience inspire them to face adversity. As they grapple with loss, deception, and internal struggles, the group finds strength in their experiences, even as they face haunting shadows from their past. They must make decisions about trust and forgiveness, learn the true meaning of sacrifice, and ultimately confront a powerful antagonist whose identity remains hidden until the climax. With themes of friendship, redemption, and resilience, "Awakened Unity" is a captivating tale that explores the complexities of human emotions and the enduring strength of bonds that can overcome even the darkest of trials. This story will take you on an emotional rollercoaster, from the highs of friendship and hope to the lows of betrayal and grief, and ultimately to the triumph of unity in the face of adversity.

Willow is gay. Like super gay. How is she supposed to tell your rude father and Gay Pride rioting mother?

The story is about two sister who never got along, finally seeing each other and it did not turn out so well. The more you get into the story, you will see how lies can break and destroy people, and how secrets unfold.

This is a small "story" somewhat made up, but also real experiences of feelings and thoughts.

Just some ideas that I come up with.

Jackson Boudelaire is overworked. His Mother and Father died in a car accident a few years prior, leaving him to take care of their debt to some shady organization and his little brother Seth Boudelaire. They both react with their parents sudden deaths differently. Jackson throws himself into his work as a detective and becomes a workaholic. Young Seth isolates himself, spending his time in the forest surrounding the town. One day Seth sees something in the forest and tries to tell Jackson, but as always Jackson is too busy to notice. Soon after Seth sees what happened in the forest strange things start happening. Did Seth see something he wasn't supposed to? What's causing all the strange events? And more importantly.... Is it all linked?

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

I knew it was wrong to fall in love with his sister. Maybe he would understand..

This is a story I wrote as a stress reliever a while ago, I decided to pick it up again. As it goes currently, it follows from two characters perspectives. One perspective is your POV, while the other is from Iden, your... "acquaintance." Enjoy party goers and bored people, have fun and give me feedback to tell me if I should continue or not. ~L

Anybody loves to travel, But for jaycee it was way too much until she meets the person who changes her life forever.

Zanny

a Boy finds out he has special abilities and finds himself saving the world

Far away, in a world where only the chosen ones get the power of the stars. Esiora. Where the sea is full of mysteries and adventures. There on the planet Esiora at a small island, lived a girl. From young age did she dream of something very big, something where people would laugh at her and say it's impossible. 'But how could it be impossible, if I didn't try it yet', said the little girl. As she stated that sentence she promised that she will not ever give up on that dream, on that 'impossible' dream.

A girl in highschools life turns upside down when her and her older brother get in a car accident, she comes out with a few broken bones. Unfortunately her brother was not so lucky, being paralyzed from the waste down. The haunting fact she was the one driving. (Not finished story)

Uuhhh help me out!! I kinda want to improve and expand the info about my Ocs...so just comment your ideas!! Please and thank you!!

This is a random story I got bored and created this. Make sure to leave comments and tune in.

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Angel, Ariana,and Asia are just three normal girls. They just finished their middle school years and summer break is almost over. High school is just one week away. They can't wait to start because being a freshman is super exciting. But something big is gonna happen! What you might ask? Well Take a look into their lives and follow along with them and see! Trust me you don't wanna miss this! (This is my first story guys please comment and tell me your thoughts!)

These are my screw it notes. When something goes down in my life I write about it. So this one is for my ex guy best friend.