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You Are The One !!! by FireflyFairy10
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You Are The One !!!by Fairy 10
Reyansh Raghuvanshi is a Famous Young Bachelor.....Sees Sara Mourya by chance in a Party And Got Interested in her... he who is a manipulator, Dominating and Lil bit Ps...
3rd wheel by ErikaDavis411
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3rd wheelby Erikawitak69
A short 3 some sex story Must read
Completed
Why I Chose You by Imaboard
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Why I Chose Youby Imaboard
I have ur secret but I can't tell you. I told u but u don't remember. I heard u but u did see. I helped u but u just forgot. I love u and it's still there ... Authors n...
The unknown person  by YummyFeet
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The unknown person by Chubby_Bee
This is a true story on what's happening to me of someone who likes me. The thing is I'm not sure who it is.
My Deep Feeling Poetry by BRoyaltii
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My Deep Feeling Poetryby B.Goddess
The feelings i am feeling is in my poems, feel free to read and tell me what you think of them. They are the honest truth and i cant wait for you to read so i can tell y...
One Direction Preferences by mollovesniall
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One Direction Preferencesby mollovesniall
I'm going to try and make up my own, but take my ideas from tumblr. feedback would be great, I need to know whether I'm wasting my time or not! have a read and let me kn...
Washed  by TyAnthony714
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Washed by TyAnthony714
A short poem about love finding you
It's a hard knock' life by vintageviibes
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It's a hard knock' lifeby Piper
Jane just wants to be a normal kid... but after what happened last summer, its hard to be normal. She has to face the bullys, her mom's fiance, and the jerk friends.. Wh...
Teachers Pet 🔐 by zaily133
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Teachers Pet 🔐by gloss-z
All i can say about this story is that...you'll have to read it to find out, at least give it a try and give feed back!! so i know what to do to make it better this sto...
Falling 4 My Bestfriends Sister by _spicybooks
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Falling 4 My Bestfriends Sisterby bookgirl101
I knew it was wrong to fall in love with his sister. Maybe he would understand..
poetic justice.  by abbylucs
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poetic justice. by abbylucs
a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten
Until we meet again by Che-Che143
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Until we meet againby Che-Che143
Just gonna have to fins out yourself!!!
Don't forget us by ChristinaAultman
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Don't forget usby Shychristina
A princess on a mission to kill her father. A guard who will forever follow the princess. A Queen who will never be a mother.
School work by 280132k
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School workby Davey
We are writing a personal narrative for ELA .This is not a real story I'm just saying it is because I need a good grade lol. Pls give me feedback so I can get a kinda g...
The Warning by Pandoraloved008
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The Warningby
The main character is wandering around in the woods to find a old man guarding a cave warning the kid saying not to enter. The kid ignores the old man and goes in anyway...
invisible scars by I_love_writing612
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invisible scarsby I_love_writing612
hi! this is my first time publishing my work and this is just what i have of the storyline and i would love to hear your ideas and feedback i know its not that good but...
Roleplay Characters!! by BriannaScarlet
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Roleplay Characters!!by Brianna Scarlet
Uuhhh help me out!! I kinda want to improve and expand the info about my Ocs...so just comment your ideas!! Please and thank you!!
The Poems of Princesses by nacsharks
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The Poems of Princessesby Olivia Langlois
Honestly, I just want to write poems of my wildly fantastical people and creatures in my head