Givetips Stories

this is just so i can try to improve my writing and use of punctuation

Just a lil heads up to my poor followers ;-;

I had never thought the end of the world would be this quiet. ..... I had never feared death.. I knew it would come for me one day, but I never pictured it like this. "My fault, this is all my fault.." Is the only thought that repetitively pounds through my mind. They are like this because of me.. Everything has turned black. With that blackness, there came emptiness. And in that emptiness, there was a deafening silence.. As for peace..? There can never be peace. At Least not in these times. Not with the Ebony mark...

Sorry guys I didn't really want to but I ran out of ideas and got confused with where my storyline will go but I'm working on a different story and I'll post it asap