Hamed Stories

Never thought of this, but was suggested by one of my friends. I wrote a series on Aladdin, and she was like, why dont you put it in a fan fiction sites? I watched Aladdin Naam Toh Suna Hoga on Sab TV recently. Though you make find it odd for someone of my age, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was during one of those episodes, where I contemplated a story of my own on Aladdin, but the main character had to be Jasmine. So, here we are, with another spin off from the Arabian Nights 1001 stories in a mature content. As a writer, I have always refrained from writing any sexual or violence, but this story has both. Not in the wildest fantasy forms, but subtle ones. I wouldnt advise this story to very young audience . So, here we go , with characters from Aladdin turned into human and weapons (as and when convenient) for the story. Please let me know what you think, and all types of criticism are welcome. (The same story is on my blog - https://thesolitarydreamer.blogspot.com , but damn no one reads blogs these days!)

Dans le Bagdad poussiéreux et pauvre des Mille et Une Nuits, Ali, beau jeune homme, qui travaille dans l'auberge misérable de Mustapha, subit humiliations et corvées épuisantes de la part de ses méchants demi-frères qui le jalousent pour sa beauté, le maltraitent, et se donnent des airs de pieux alors qu'ils sont violents et oisifs. Leur haine vient de leur père, marchand de babouches, qui déteste Ali et le traite comme un esclave. Bientôt, Ali va faire la rencontre d'Hamed, beau jeune homme au grand coeur.