Hopefulhumor Stories

This is a medieval fantasy at where i make my fave vharacter a angst BAMF Soft boy (tm). This is my first fan fiction but not my first book so please, no hate and only read if you would like. The grammar should be good but I am not sure. I would love it if you had any suggestions for grammar or better wording. Critisism is encouraged. I will put a warning: I used a single "Bad Word" in the first chapter. It is proper language for a medieval time period, so I put it in. Edit (August 1, 2020): I have discontinued this book but might be rewriting it under the same name. Depends on how the poll goes. Edit 2 (June 17, 2021): I'm back benches and I'm back with a freshly redone first chapter!

Annabelle is a 16 year old girl. Her Mother is a business woman who doesn't have time to take care of her child. Annabelle's Mother Teresa decided to send her to this boarding school in London where her roommate became her best friend,the popular girls hate her, and the bad boy wont leave her alone.