Instead of the ending Veronica wrote, I came up with my own. Tris, Tobias, and others go back into the city and try to make their lives as normal as possible...
Basically i disagreed with Tobias and Tris not being together so... I wrote this to cheer myself up because i truly feel like them being separated spoiled the whole thing for me :) It's unedited because i wrote it in a frantic panic of anger