Improvements Stories

Looking for a safe space to get constructive feedback? A place where you're not just called out, but also given ways to improve? A place to grow and expand into the vast space of your creativity? Then you've found the right place. Here, I strive to give you the best review I possibly can-highlighting strong points, areas for improvement, and offering usable suggestions. I don't sugarcoat, so this isn't the place for you if you're looking for an ego boost. That said, I do my best to offer reviews with a calm, professional tone-a means to raise your confidence and morale. So-what are you waiting for?

Some things are created for the sole purpose to be destroyed.

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Some mistakes do not end with regret-they echo beyond life itself. Arjun learns this too late. Blinded by manipulation, pride, and misunderstandings, he pushes away the one person who loved him with a purity the world rarely offers-Adithi. When loss strikes and death follows, Arjun finds himself standing at the edge of the Final Crossing, burdened not by fate, but by his own words. Given a choice by unseen guardians-to suffer eternally or to change-Arjun chooses transformation. He wakes up fifteen years in the past, in a life untouched by regret, where Adithi is still alive and time has offered him one final chance. Haunted by memories of a future that must never happen again, Arjun must confront his flaws, unlearn his cruelty, and protect the love he once destroyed. This is a story about redemption, second chances, and the devastating power of words-and how choosing love, when given another chance, can rewrite destiny itself.

In this book , I will be training my writing skills by trying my hands on different essay and directed writing questions given to me by co pilot. I want to improve my English writing skills so I get a good score in my IGCSE And also so I have better and more versatile writing skill which I can use to write amazing stories for your readership. Stick around if you're interested You can help me by reviewing these short stories and giving me constructive criticism. 😊

(Drawings started in 2017-now, although I'm logging them right now!) Please look at my improvement! I'd appreciate feedback as well! Comment anything pls 🙏🙏 Uhh I was born in 2010 btw so that gives u an idea on my age for some of these drawings. (Ik that's pretty dumb to put on the internet but whatever)

Choi Soo Rim is a nerdy girl along with her friends (black pink Jisoo, gfriend Sinb, twice Momo). Their boyfriends dumped them for looks witch made them confidence and reborn them self. If you want to know what happens continue on reading the story. (Completed) Cover credits to shwetha_kookie

Rewire Your Mind, Reclaim Your Life! ⚠️ If you're not serious about making a real change in your life - close this book right now. This is not a feel-good book. This is a do-something book. Change doesn't happen by chance. It happens by choice - over and over again. And most people never get what they want because they keep waiting to "feel ready." Here's the truth: - You're never going to feel fully ready. - No one is coming to save you. - And the time you think you still have... is running out. This book is a collection of tools, truths, and techniques designed to wake you up - and keep you going. You'll learn how to rewire your thinking, reset your energy, and take full responsibility for what comes next. You'll get real, practical methods that you can use immediately to start becoming who you actually want to be. Let this be your turning point. Let's begin.

This is basically something I'll do to show how my art has improved throughout the year. I'll add onto it in the years that pass when possible :D Maybe I'll add the art from previous years. Who knows? (⁠ ͡⁠°⁠ ͜⁠ʖ⁠ ͡⁠°⁠)

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Do you want to improve your story? Well here's what you need. A book that will help you to improve your story as well as to improve your skills about writing. Well, ano namang makukuha mo if you'll joined this book. Here's what you'll received First, I will add your story in my library Second, I will read it so that I can help you how to improved it. And third, after I critiqued your story in a good way. I will post it in this book with my suggestions, compliments and comments about your story. Ee ano namang dapat mong gawin ? It's simple. You will just Joined this book and follow the rules. Yeah, as simple as that! It is a win-win situation. So what are you waiting for ? Join now !

Artbooks,the way every artist personifies their styles. Hoping to get an audience,or dreaming to become professional(see what I did there?), an artbook is the first step to that And this is my art book. (yes the title is also an undertale reference)

book 2 of my drawings but I'm trying to improve ❤ help point out where I need to improve, support me and show me a little love if you feel like it. thanks for visiting this book and I hope you have a lovely day.

★彡█►─ ❝ 𝗦𝗼𝗺𝗲𝘁𝗶𝗺𝗲𝘀 𝗜 𝘄𝗼𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗴𝗼𝗲𝘀 𝘁𝗵𝗿𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵 𝗺𝘆 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝘁𝗼 𝗲𝗻𝗱 𝘂𝗽 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝗮 𝗺𝘂𝘀𝗵-𝘂𝗽 𝗽𝗼𝘁𝗮𝘁𝗼- ❞ ─◄█ Traditional and Digitally art, hope you'll enjoy my crappy drawings. Tricks and criticism are acceptable but don't be straight-up rude about it, not everything happens in an instant. ┊ ˚➶ ｡˚ ☁️ 𝗦𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱 ₊❏❜ ⋮ 𝗗𝗲𝗰𝗲𝗺𝗯𝗲𝗿 1９, 2０2０ ⌒ ┊ ˚➶ ｡˚ ☁️ 𝗦𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘀 ₊❏❜ ⋮ 𝗢𝗻𝗴𝗼𝗶𝗻𝗴 ⌒

They say the past must be put aside- Learn to let your life continue without them. But what if among the healthy-minded people of the earth, there's one person who simply just... Refuses? "Fate will shed tears after I manhandle my way out of the inevitable." Etched into his growing existence are the words: "I'll make it this time." Failure after failure; over and over and over again. But everyone has their limits. And frankly, this one's breaking point is long overdue. ₊˚ ✧ ━━━━⊱⋆⊰━━━━ ✧ ₊˚ 𝓟𝓪𝓻𝓲𝓼 𝓐𝓾𝓬𝓵𝓪𝓲𝓻 - a rising pianist who dreams to be even bigger in her field one day. Working hard to get her name recognized by potential producers or endorsers while coping through an arranged marriage, she meets someone who is able to provide warmth and comfort to the cold, monotone life she's living. 𝓚𝔂𝓻𝓸 𝓐𝓻𝓰𝓱𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓲 - a simple-living photographer who seems to want nothing else except taking pictures for his memory board and spending time with her. Though deemed annoying at first, he makes his way into her life and helps her through her supposedly hidden misfortunes. But is that really all there is to it? ₊˚ ✧ ━━━━⊱⋆⊰━━━━ ✧ ₊˚ !! ALL IMAGES I USED AND PROBABLY WILL USE IN THIS BOOK (including the base image in the cover) ARE FROM PINTEREST !! THIS BOOK- THE STORY, THE PLOT, THE CHARACTERS, ETC. ARE ALL ORIGINALLY MADE BY ME. I DO NOT ALLOW ANYONE TO TRANSLATE OR REWRITE MY WORK (CLAIM IT AS THEIRS) NO MATTER WHAT. ctto.

"From a Place of Lack" by Ladi Dyvine is a transformative guide that explores the power of mindset in shaping our reality. Too often, we find ourselves trapped in cycles of scarcity-financially, emotionally, or spiritually-without realizing that true abundance begins within. This book takes readers on a journey of self-discovery, helping them identify limiting beliefs, embrace gratitude, and shift their perspective to cultivate a life of fulfillment. Through practical exercises and real-life insights, From a Place of Lack provides the tools needed to break free from negative patterns, build resilience, and create lasting change. Whether you're struggling with self-doubt, financial hardship, or emotional wounds, this book offers a roadmap to move from a mindset of lack to one of empowerment, abundance, and joy. Are you ready to shift your perspective and step into the life you deserve?

I mean my friends have it and I do art also so why tf not.

Hello! Nice to meet whoever you may be! Thank you for taking your time to see how much my art have gotten better over the years. I do my best to update, but life is life and you never know what it will throw at you. I do try my best to fulfil requests if I am given any. Some art I draw is stress related, boredness, or just pure inspiration! You don't have to continue within this book if you don't want to, that is your choice to make! If you do choose to continue, just know that it is terrible in the beginning to getting slowly better at some things. Please enjoy this art book of mine and you can give me tips to help get my art better! Thank you! Best Ranking(s)- Boredness- #4

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This book is where I give you tips to help you heal, I myself have experienced alot during alot of years and honestly, it has always been my passion to help others or give them comforting words. I myself like to write alot of opinions about things and I like to educate people by giving long paragraphs full of speech so I decided to why not publish something that could help someone? Though I'm not really a professional I do hope that this will help you. Some chapters may not contain advices but it does contain speeches or awareness about alot of things, I will update this book once a week and try my best to continue writing till I reach the audience that I'm currently targeting. Soon to be finished! ------------------------------------------------------- ~Notes and credits~ - Some images I used aren't mine, full credits to the original owner. - This book may contain sensitive topics about mental health including suicide, self harm etc - Might contain some wrong grammars so I do hope you guys don't mind. ------------------------------------------------------- ~Enjoy the chapters~