Indepth Stories

{CLOSED} Honest, in-depth book reviews and writing advisement.

The sky was painted an array of colours, from pinks and reds to blues and purples. The trees stood tall in the deep, green forest. A river flowed with energy nearby which could be heard from afar. Bugs of different types crawled across the floor of the land and birds sung their songs in their nests. The cracks and pops of the fire and strums of guitar strings finished it off as the perfect night for those gathered together around the campfire, the fairy lights set up also helping to set the mood. The group of happy Cephalopods sit in content, letting the music move them as they thought about how this was the last night of their much enjoyed road trip. It was perfect. All of them together. It was a moment that all of them would cherish forever. The past 2 weeks made them realize how important they all were to each other, and how much this trip really made the, show their true colours and grow closer. And I'm gonna be telling you all about how you and the main characters of the Splatoon went on this road trip and formed unforgettable bonds and forged amazing memories! So come on, you can pick which seat you want!

Just something weighing on my thoughts, I'll change the description later

I stepped on an envelope slipped through my door. I delicately opened it, with a knowing smile. Kalif. The skies are going to be filled with stars tonight. I know you're more of a moon kind of girl and I would love to lie under the stars with you. I know you are already smiling. I'll pick you up at 7. He was right. I was a moon type of girl, but for him, I could be an anything type of girl. Only to feel his embrace and bask under his soft, consuming gaze. "I wouldn't miss it for the world." I whispered to the letter, as if he could hear me.

I did one on RWBY so this is basically going to be what I noticed in video games (Dreaming Mary, Deemo, Im Scared, etc.) and anime (probably.) Hope you like. Bai Bai:3.

Just some poems I made

The ever increasing evil of witchcraft and sorcery has forced a division between the group of kingdoms on the far east of a deserted world. The Associates who have shunned and banned, with severe consequences, any form of practice of magic. And then, the Rebels, of a lesser number, who insist that sorcery was the fuel keeping the kingdoms alive and running. But with greed, self centeredness and a growing lust for hunger being the fuel that runs the human heart...the Leaders on both sides are more than willing to compromise the most sacred of standards to win a war that should never have begun. A war that begins with an overlook of justice and ripples with a curse that would haunt both sides. *****"***** The King has been assassinated, and the young royals are forced to flee. The princess Kaina has no option but to adapt to a life that she has never survived before, whilst searching for her older brother who had been banished for reasons known only by the King. She must persuade him to return home and take his place as the rightful heir to the throne, but chances become slimmer when she realizes that her father might not have been the symbol of integrity she mused him to be. Meanwhile, the unfortunate few that have been left behind under the reign of a tyrant must figure out a way to break the King's military from within, but this would take a lot more than they planned on a piece of paper. Secrets would be revealed, alliances formed, love won and lost, and yes, curses broken. The New Bloods, akainas, as they were called must discover who they are and come together to destroy it before it consumes everything in its path in a twist of utter darkness.

A short little piece inside the life and relationship of two characters.

A walk along the language that flows like silk.

A person stumbles into a lost dying behemoth power of the past. He wanted to find this, and he has a goal that has been alive before himself. This factory holds more mystery then meets the eye, will he be able to survive the factories temptation?

Beneath Good and Evil In the demon realm every powerful being dreams of ascending to the Fantasy realm/Mortal Plane. Prince IGNIS The Ember Heart a young but mighty Demonic Dragon of a small Dark Dynasty stands at the precipice to spark a legendary all-out war between all his enemies and then some, with the promise of evolving to an Imperator Demonic Dragon a being of unparalleled might. Follow him as he weaves a vast web of Deceit and builds up his forces to ultimately rally against not one enemy but the whole of demon realm. All for his promise of ascending to the Fantasy realm/Mortal Plane and evolving into the ultimate life form.

This is a book of things that matter to me because I don't know how else to express them and y'all probably don't care about my opinions lol

a flavorful taste into a teenager girl's life with poetry.

A journey through life....

As i sit in my chair You, on the contraire, Shall comprehend thus writing For it surely says despair

Rayleen has never been normal since her childhood, she wasn't the special one in her family she knew it was only going to be her. She had to be independent, but was always the one to take care of her family. Things fall apart quickly in her world because of one person. As she tries to finds answers she starts to realizes, it's just begun. THIS IS BOOK ONE I REPEAT BOOK ONE THIS IS GOING TO BE THE BACK STORY FOR THE REAL DEAL YOU HAVE TO READ THE BEGINNING TO UNDERSTAND THE OTHER BOOKS.

Soar into a deep story of the life of Peril, from her learning of her powers to her finally being set free from Queen Scarelt's grasp. Of course, this is not canon, but I would like to infer and guess on what happened to Peril while in the claws of Scarlet for all those years before the Dragonets of Destiny came! Please enjoy! [MAJOR SPOILERS FOR MOST OF THE SERIES!!!]

A story about me and growing up with ulcerative colitis and hypermobility!!

If you would like some honest feedback on your work from someone completely unqualified to critique peoples work, than this is the place for you! Guarantee from me: If you submit your book and I accept to do the review (only reason I would not accept is if for some reason so many people are dying to have me review their book I simply can't get to them all) than I will provide thoughtful analysis of the first three chapters. Reading beyond the third chapter will only occur of I genuinely like your story personally. If I read more, I review more! Anyways, check it out if you are interested! :D

Tragedies after tragedies in his life but he doesn't wish to give up, yet after just a small encounter with her , his heart wasn't that of a strong-willed one as it used to be. Rehan Gonses , a true example of a person who has lived through times where any other person will wish he/she was dead. A warrior in life fighting through so many disastrous circumstances every passing moment just so he can see the light of another day but one day , when he got a glimpse of a girl , the girl who was living in his shadows the entire time to check on him every other instant , just so he doesn't give up, caused him to have his heart , the heart that was dead inside for a decade now , throb even just for a little bit. Not having any idea about the girl,who caused this unforeseen change in his heart was in his shadows the whole time, How will things start to change for him?