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It looks like a ordinary house but if you go inside the spookiness will start. One boy did that and that boy is James.

My opinion on some watt pad stories!! I have to say this loudly so please listen!!!! THIS IS MY OPINION!!! ALL STORIES I HAVE WRITTEN ABOUT WILL EITHER BE PRAISED OR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!! I understand that writing takes courage, loyalty, and love for writing so as I write my opinions keep in mind that I love all of the effort and I am only trying to state criticism like an editor would!! I won't bash any stories completely just give honest assessment of story, of writing style and of things I see could be worked on by writer! I am no one but an avid reader so I appreciate all stories read but some as I'll state are par for the course and others well although enjoyed need construction! I know no one has asked me to give my opinion but I must give props and well sometimes I just want to say hey if this is different the book would be great!! Well you get me!! I have no hate for any but I love some!! If you do want me to read and critic it send me a message in here it will go!

With hair like the midnight sky and eyes like the bluest of oceans she stands above the water. Her name never to be known and her lips never to be spoken from. She stands quiet waiting for the wind to catch. And in that moment shes gone. 17 year old Scarlet is like the wind. She never stay still. Scarlet lives alone in an abandon house just north of North High School. Ever since her mother died shes been on her own. But now its time she finds out who she really is. Will she make the right choice.