Kauia Stories

-I saw this girl with long brown hair, and some white sunglasses. Along with a white cardigan with a pink tank top. And some jean shorts. She said "Wilber?" and I didn't recognize her. I replied with "Um it depends..... who are you?" She walked away slowly, looking sad. I saw her bracelet, and it matched mine. No it couldn't be! Cali?- -"Oh my word!" I heard a man say I saw a trail of blood staining the sand from Cali's feet, and it stopped at a rock. I looked up and couldn't believe my eyes! I shot my head back down. My poor Cali!- -Tears over flowed her eyes, as she fell to her knees, cradling her face in her hands. I stuttered "I'm so sorry!" she glanced up at me, and I saw a look of worry, wonder, but most of all fear. She pushed her hand out, and out of natural instinct, I held it. I heard some sirens, and saw the ambulance pull up- -"Now, to get things straight, Cali moved to Kauai in the seventh grade, and met me! We've been practically sisters ever sense!" "Oh! Ok!" I replied. "so she pretty much replaced me with you!?" I said I looked down and kicked some sand. Dakota froze, she looked at me with sympathy. "Why do you say that?"- -I looked at her and mouthed the words, I'm sorry!- -"ahhhh!" I screamed so loud as I trip. I hear a super loud Screeeech! I saw a car, and everything went black.- -"You have a really bad concussion, a broken leg, and lots of scratches”- So much had happened, in such a short time! I have to learn how to live with a broken leg for a while, and I have to live with myself knowing, that..... I could have been killed! *************************** Authors note ******************************** Hey peeps! I am loving how this story is turning out! I hope you agree! Please leave comments, of what you think (positive, and negative!) And what you think should happen next! I need some feed back, or I won't know what to improve on, or what to keep doing! THANKS!!!!!! Puppylover829 :{ D #behtany_hamilton