Khair storie

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Title：【Scary Hotel Room Episode】 One day, a man on a business trip was staying in an old hotel. Staying there was very cheap because this hotel was built on top of a school that burned down. If it was up to him, he wouldn't stay at this hotel. However, the company he worked at made the reservation for him, so he had no choice. The man took the keys for his room from reception and went to look for it. Once he found it, he unlocked the door, entered inside and turned on the lights. The room was dark and dusty. It was a small room, with 1 single bed, small refrigerator, small safety deposit box and a bathroom. A painting was hung on the wall, above the bed. The painting had a girl with a long, black hair and big eyes, sitting alone on a bench in a park. The man thought the painting was creepy. He had already had dinner outside, so he decided to take a bath and go to bed immediately afterwards. He took off his clothes and entered the bathroom. When the man opened the faucet of the bathtub, there was a sound, "Burble! Gurgle! Gurgle![→Gofu! Gobo, Gobo!；Japanese Onomatopoeia]"

'Ummul Khair sultan' never did plan on getting married, but what will happen when her father marries her off to the famous CEO of Afzal industries. Ameer Ibrahim Afzal. *** Will she ever fall in love with him? Infact, will they ever get married? Not Edited

Labari Mai bantausayi gami da karfafawa,labarin wadanda aka halitta da nakasa irinta wada (dwarp). Kubiyoni danjin labarin maryamu Baffa goje