Kirbyplanetrobobot Stories

Haltmann's former secretary/current CEO finds Y/N to be quite a different person. Perhaps in a good way? Disclaimer: I do not own any characters portrayed in this reading nor do I own Kirby Star Allies or Kirby Planet Robobot, or make profit from it. The games and their characters rightfully belong to Nintendo/HAL Laboratory. The title cover art is by DokiDokiTsuna on DeviantArt: https://www.deviantart.com/dokidokitsuna/art/I-like-your-hair-841708624

This is an old comic I made back in 2018. I want to continue it, but want other's feedback on it. (Story is basically the same as the video game Kirby Planet Robobot's plot)

You are a citizen of dreamlands nearby villages, until a giant machine attacks the planet of popstar... Meta knight, the one star warrior you adored tried to pull an independence day and rammed his ship the halberd into the giant machine. Resulting in his demise, or so you thought... Now while you were in hiding from these invaders the halt workers in their mechs had found you hiding in your ruined village, and you were taken to a weird place, then you saw someone named susie. She reminded you of taranza and magolor in a way, and to your horror, meta knight had been mechanized......

After the battle with Dimenzio, the world was saved from its inevitable destruction by the new revolution. However, it didn't take long for another problem to arise. An unknown spaceship appeared out of nowhere and announced a wedding. But the bride gives Chara a unsettling feeling. She must quickly uncover the truth behind her intuition before it's too late and something happens to all the inhabitants of the spaceship.