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HIIIII!! *waves* i write short passages and well this is one of them, THIS IS NOT A STORY, i know this needs a lot, like a whole friggin lot, of edits and I welcome criticism with open arms, just not a little too mean? Back to this i would absolutely love to hear your opinions and how i could improve my writing style! THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR DECIDING TO READ THIS, honestly means a lot, thanks once again and love you guys!!