Magicheirloom Stories

Hello fellow readers, it is nice to see your eyes. Please leave me comments on how YOU think the story plot should go. I'm just curious for a new perspective! 😊 Or just tell me about mistakes I made, so that I can get better. This whole quarantine thing is a letdown, I'm dying to go outside. Where I live it is crazy with the whole corona thing, DC sucks. I have way too much time, why not use it on improving? Everyone's got a teacher in them, they just gotta try. As Kaitlyn gets used to living in Florida, she starts noticing weird things happening around her. The story turns when she discovers that she is the heir to the commander's sword. You see, in her family, all kids are born men and they marry women and have a male child ... so on. All the women in the Heron family marry in while all the men are blood relatives. The sword is passed from father to son. Then, Kaitlyn's parents had her, a girl. Her mom was over the moon, but her dad thought he can never pass the sword down to a girl. He got rid of her, or so he thought. Eventually, he tried to have another kid, so the bloodline would continue, but his ancestors were enraged at his behavior with his daughter. So he was cast out and for 30 years the Heron family bloodline did not have an owner for the sword. But alas, what is written in stone, is written in stone. The rules of house Heron were created 400 years ago, so one way or another Kaitlyn must retrieve the sword. Or no one is safe.