Manuthol Stories

Made as a commission for a friend for her birthday. Short story telling a cute little story about two of the children of the Malware Faction. Gabby and Leo fight against a terrible evil... Kind of

Critiques and criticisms welcome. I'm open to what people think so feel free to leave a comment if you wish. I'm hoping to create a fairly lengthy story about Michelle's time before joining the Order of Tenebris. Michelle Umbra-Ignis is a young looking girl who never tells anyone her age for some reason. She can control fire and sometimes seems to meld with the shadows a bit too well. In the sun her long wavy hair mimics the color and movements of the flames she conjures. Shard is a big dummy head with big stupid muscles and gorgeous blue eyes. He runs from kingdom to kingdom freeing those in need and righting wrongs like a true hero. If only he wasn't so stupid and non heroic. "Michelle can you please stop bad mouthing me before the story even begins?" "The story is about me, why are you even here!" "Because we need to add to the backstory." "Don't talk like you are self aware. Go back to your rebellion and shut up!" "Alright, fine. I'll go wait for you to try and kill me again." "Good, know your place."