Historias de Middlefantasy

A short test story that has a continuation written, but I won't post it for now. I want to know if this will do well before I put myself really out there. This story does have a murder within the first few seconds of reading, so if you don't like that, I'll leave it up to you whether you read or not.

The vastness of the universe is one that baffles even the brightest of minds. So for a curious Avaryxian boy named Zeke, he was really baffled when 14 year old Jennifer Bell popped up in his backyard. She finds herself bound toward an entirely new world full of mythica, adventure, and peril... Join them on their adventure through the boundless world of Avaryx, where they journey to mend vows, rescue lost travelers, including her sister, and uncover the wherabouts of the deviant of the planet, the Null.