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These are some poems I wrote based on characters from the Dune books, they are from all the books so from dune to chapterhouse of dune. This is my first published collection on here and I genuinely don't know if they're good or bad because only two people have read them, I'm open to any criticism so if you read them please leave a comment on what I can do better or what you didn't like. <3

Paul and Zane are brothers, both heir to the Atreides house. When they leave their home world Caladan and land in Arrakis, some... unfortunate events happen that will show them the way to glory. Will they choose that path? This is a Dune fanfiction based on the movies and NOT the books ( cause I don't have them). IF there are some mistakes please let me know. There is swearing. Thank you and enjoy -Artemis &lt;3

𝅘𝅥𝅮❝ꜱᴘᴇᴇᴅɪɴ' ᴜᴘ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛʙᴇᴀᴛ ʙᴀɴɢɪɴ' ɪɴ ᴍʏ ᴄʜᴇꜱᴛ ᴡʜᴇɴ ʏᴏᴜ ᴘᴜᴛ ɪᴛ ᴏɴ ᴍᴇ, ʏᴏᴜ ʀᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇ ᴍʏ ꜱᴛʀᴇꜱꜱ ʏᴏᴜ ɢᴏᴛ ᴍᴇ ꜱᴏ ʜɪɢʜ, ᴛᴀᴋɪɴ' ᴅᴇᴇᴘ, ᴅᴇᴇᴘ ʙʀᴇᴀᴛʜꜱ ❞𝅘𝅥𝅮