Myownsong Stories

Hey guys i need your opinions on my song. it's a little draft and i don't know if it's good

These poems were my deepest thoughts and pain. And how the world can be unfair,

it's my first rant here

Okayyy so this is nothing really, I was just playing around with lyrics and wrote something. Its not great cause I'm not good at rhyming but someone can totally take my idea and make an amazing song...