Nativelanguage Stories

Hey This is my first english story, so I'm not really good in writing storys in my second language. But I try to improve my english skills with the stories. I'd appreciate some feedback. If you wanna read some german stories, watch my profile, mybe you're interested.

Localization.Strings If you only read one, please read "Speak Slowly." Poetry. Some is long. Really long. Some are average length. I don't think any are particularly short though. The Indigenous Language used in some poems is Menominee and any Menominee words are translated. All are accurate translations, but some are more artistic translations rather than straight translations. Waewaenen! Thank you!

Golden Crow was a young girl when she left home.She ran for days an meet a spiritual tribe called 'Black Star'.Golden Crow wasn't her real name,her real name was Zerena Feathen,She earned her name through helping the tribe,winning wars and being the Chiefs Step Daughter. One day a English noble man came to take Silver Feather,The chief away,Golden Crow knew how important he was to the tribe so she took his place. She sailed to London to get what needed to be done and return home,Little did she know she was in the same town as Reapers,Demons and a young Earl.