Needfeedback Stories

All the words I wish I would've said/I wish someone would've told me. This is my first book. I have so much more to add. Please give me feedback! I'd appreciate it.

Laurel Chueng lives a regular strict Asian life. Study, do work, study, do chores, study, maybe have a social life, maybe if lucky maybe hang out with friends, study. Just your average Asian. Until she gets these weird letters sent to her house. Who sent them?

Just think. Every line has a world issue or leads to a different topics, yes it's negative but that's what the world we live in has turned to. By just thinking , we can change more than just people because it takes just one to change the world.

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Zoe moves to California and meets Will . She never met a person before who was so kind and understand her so well

Following an accident resulting in the death of his family when he was away studying overseas, Haruki has cut all ties to his past and has been focusing on the future, going so far as to block out all things reminding him of his past. He's landed a job and for the past 4-5 years, have been overworking himself. Now, he's on a business trip/vacation back to his hometown for the summer where memories are in abundance.

just some short stories to give myself ideas for other stories and practice other scenarios. feedback would be nice.

Allison who has just been turned into a werewolf and is learning to cope with her new found abilities... Join her, Kate, Sean, and Josh on the romantic, tragic yet beautiful journey ahead.

Read the first chapters/prologues that I've written for future projects! I will be adding the excerpts as I write them and removing the sample chapters/prologues when I'm getting ready to publish the story here.

Classic trope. Y/N falls in love with CEO. Too bad there's a twist and things don't go well for Y/N. chapter 2 coming soon!

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Gemma is an average teenage girl. Although she isn't the most "popular" kid in school but she still stays strong...or will she break? After she lost her parents due to a car crash she doesn't know what to do. "Gemma dear, are you all ready," Aunt Moxie says "Yeah" I say wiping the last bit of tears from my eyes I turn to face Aunt Moxie's sad expression, i could't hold back the tears. I ran to Aunt Moxie and wrapped my arms around her. I started to bawl in her sleeve.

just your average anti social girl who meets a guy that she would never expect herself to fall for but once she does their love story is definitely an unordinary one

Zero Point: The foundational 'nothing' from which all 'somethings' could be defined, subtracted, or rewritten. _________________________________________ ❝ 𝑻𝒉𝒆 𝒑𝒆𝒓𝒇𝒆𝒄𝒕 𝒔𝒘𝒐𝒓𝒅 𝒊𝒔 𝒐𝒏𝒆 𝒔𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒅 𝒊𝒏 𝒔𝒊𝒍𝒌 ❞ 𝐓he path is clear for Skia―become a Magic Knight, gain prestige, shield her family from the political attacks drawn by their rise. Duty defines the "prodigy" of House Velos, a hollow title. 𝐁ut a captain's offer places a substantial target on her back. Before she can put on the robe, she is forced into the intricate web of politics, a series of assassinations and sabotages. Here, calculation cannot compensate for her social ineptitude. 𝐀 sword's purpose is given by the hand that holds it. As she fights for her house's survival, she must ask herself: "what do 𝐼 truly want beyond duty and utility?" ﹙𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙨 ︰ on-going﹚ 「 © 𝟸𝟶𝟸𝟻 | 𝚞𝚋𝟷𝚚𝚞𝚒𝚝𝟶𝚞𝚜 」

Guys I'm really sorry about this jut I'm sending this to a girl soon to ask her on a date so I really need feedback!!!

This is kinda a complete overhaul of the entire story yet also follows the same storyline. It's only different by the fact arc 2 characters get into camp during arc one but are sent to an exchange program at my own camp, Camp Flower Fruit. This is just the ideas to get feedback on so I can do better.

This is a bunch of my short stories. I dont like writing novels but enjoy writing poems but they are mostly sad please give me some feed back on what you think and give it a go!

Hey this is just a book of random pictures I take! I'm posting them to see what feedback I get. So vote and comment if u like them!