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  • The Strange Kind Of Perfect by Mykaylynn
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    { EDITING } Kristen Mays never thought her life could change as fast as the speed of coffee going down her bra. Unfortunately for her, it did. She thought everything was going great only come to find out her boyfriend of forever has been cheating on her with her best friend. Then Lucas Granger shows up. Charming, handsome, and let's not forget British (swoon). He's looking for friends, and fortunately for him, he meets Kristen. BOOK ONE Rankings: #2 in Teen Fiction
  • Claimed - a Portwright Book by writeriz
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    Sophie I was never interested in boys. Not like Alice, not like my sister, not like the other girls at school. I'd tried a couple of girls, but found that wasn't for me either. I was happy in my books. I figured love and sex was something I'd get around to one day, like the idea of children or my PhD thesis subject; it was something for future Sophie. I just had to get through the next two months lead up to my sister's perfect summer wedding, then it was off to uni. But, then there was him. Declan Ten years I'd been a Martin Boy, working my way up, proving my worth. I'd won all the fights I'd been given, I followed orders blindly, I did what needed doing. My tenacity and loyalty had earned me the moniker 'CúMhartain'; I was the Cú, Paddy Martin's Hound, and I was a good guard dog. No one got to a Martin with me around. I had my place and I knew who and what I was. But, then there was her. *WIP - first draft, unedited, mostly stream of consciousness. Could use the feedback - not sure how good it is, plus it needs a serious sensitivity read from anyone Irish as I let my imagination run away with me.*
  • Me, Myself, and Others by ForgottenDreams24
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    WARNING: IN SERIOUS NEED OF AN EDIT!! "It's always been me, myself, and I. Now? More like me, myself, and others. Six more others." ••••• Haley McBride has always been on her own, with the exception of her workaholic mom who she never sees anymore. So when her mom drops her off at an old friends house with no explanation whatsoever, Haley doesn't know how to react. Especially since said friend had six teenage boys. Six hot teenage boys. Tensions are high, hormones are raging, questions thrown, secrets kept. Haley doesn't know what to do now that its her, herself, and others.
  • Moment Of Weakness by BlakeGamble
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    Just a thought
  • Racing with the bad boy by ShannonBooth3
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    No. 1 in car! Amelia Banks isn't your typical girl, knowing all there's is to know about cars, racing and mechanics can make someone an outcast. Despite all of that she loves to dance, which makes her mum happy in the fact that her daughter isn't a complete boy at heart. Amelia's two best friends have personality in bucket loads, so why is her and her friends existence ignored in school? Her next door neighbour Ollie Turner couldn't be anymore different, he has the hearts of every girl in school apart from Amelia and her friends. So what happens when Ollie finally notices her and they get put in the same mechanical engineering class together? Throw in illegal racing, lots of trouble, road trips and love? Could it be a total disaster or a miracle? --------------------------- "What?" I ask him. "why are you here?" He questions. "I'm I'm this class, this is my other class I was telling you about on Saturday, oh do you remember Saturday? When we hung out and spoke all night, oh I guess not, since we're not friends" I spat at him. A flash of hurt appears in his eyes. "Look I'm sorry, the boys wanted to speak to you guys today but I thought you'd be better off without us" what did he mean? That made no sense. "Save it, you knew we'd ruin your reputation since we're outcasts and you're popular and all" he raked a hand through his hair at my statement. "Look, it was scary how fast we got along, it took me months to befriend the lads and with you... and the girls, it was so easy, I won't lie though I wasn't sure how people would react if we hung out but then I realise none of them people mean anything to me, they're nobodies" ***FOLLOW ME FOR RESTRICTED CHAPTERS***
  • A Sight for Sore Eyes by amessamyn
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    Description Brooke is you average girl with a messed up past. Her father walked out of her life at age 10. Her mother died at age 17. All she wants to do is find her dad. But now she's an "adult" and can handle herself. But can she? That the question that pushes itself into her head. Into her mind. Taking up every last inch of space and not leaving any room for the things she needs most. Love, hope, company. When Brooke walks into Country town app & tap a surprise meets her. Two more lonely messed up " adults". Hannalea O' Brian is just as messed up as Brooke, maybe more. She had 3 siblings and a single mom in her life. Her 3 younger sisters died in a car crash the year before. Her mother was so struck by grief she drank her self to death. Hannalea came home to her mother lying on the couch, dead, with a bottle of vodka in hand. Kadens had a bad life right from the getgo. His mother died in child birth and his dad was an abusive drunk. He had 5 siblings. 3 older brothers who gave up and left him. 2 younger sisters, one who died from the abuse and the other who was put into foster care. Leaving him to be the responsible " adult" and deal with their father. When Brooke, Hanna and Kaden meet, they decide to deal. Together. Every night the go out and find true love, all the while finding out what really happened I their tragedies. When they bump into Jacob their system goes out of wack. Brooke, Hanna and Kaden fall in love.
  • Why Me? by eltybaby
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    Imagine moving to a new town on the other side of the country. Now imagine that house is haunted. Follow the story of Maddie as she discovers the horrors of her new home. *I only update when I feel like it so there could be days between chapters or years...
  • Guardian by Disaster73
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    Cassandra was turned into an angel. 400 years later she was promoted to a Guardian. What happens when the person she's supposed to keep watch over turns out to be her fated love?
  • You Were My Hardest GoodBye  by KarenElizabethKe44
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    Ok, I'm waiting to be further into the book before doing a Description. But I do know for a fact editing is well needed. Just stick with me😊😂 Also it is a bit confusing so you just gotta pay attention. I apologize just tryna to be a writer, I'm young and giving this a go!!😂😫 AND DONT STEAL MY STORY!!! DONT TRANSLATE IT. JUST READ IT AND GO ON WITH YOUR LIFE😂😂😂💯😈
  • Paws and a Tail?! This can't be good! by Fauna_the_fox
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    16 year old Fiona Gurner woke up one morning. Just a regular morning and nothing happening. Or so she thought! She finds out she's a bit to low to the ground. Scratch that ALOT. But her hearing was better and sight. What Is going on? Join Fiona on her journey to find out why she is odd. She will meet friends and enemies to battle. Will she find her answers? Read this story to find out!
  • Blerbs by Kilala14
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    A bunch of fragments that will probably never become real stories. I still want constructive criticism. These are not supposed to go together or make sense, but I will try my best to write a quick synopsis. There is no updating schedule, because I write these as they come to be, and it will take me a bit to type and/or upload them. This will include violence and swearing, so be warned. Also, this is mine. There will be no fanfiction published in this book. Don't use my stuff, and if you find someone who has, tell me please.
  • Warlock by NicholasPHawthorn
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    A boy named James stumbles upon a magical Community of people called Warlocks, and attempts to join them. This is a work in progress, please give me suggestions on how to lengthen the book. There may be typos and blank spaces for characters names, please point these out to me. Please enjoy this book about magic and adventure! -Nick