Networksaga Stories

Hey guys this is gonna be my first ever story I've ever written so it would be nice with some feedback. Well then to the idea of this story will have seven different sides (for example one would have the main character in one universe while other will have in a different one) all of this is based on my imagination so don't judge. Most of these universes will be mostly anime or games. So without further a do lets get on to the story!