Newmind Stories

This is a collection of life concepts in a poem. I believe it needs one to really concentrate and really feel what is in my content to understand. still a learner, so please advice,comments,compliments are needed. constructive criticism is appreciated as well. The below is a stanza from one the poems in mh book:- Its ten years ago when I swore to love my dad But the truth is very open, There're things that I did bad. Chances for a change I took in every place And the truth I's hiding dad is that I got a lot of friends.