Oblivionlove Stories

Hey, this is my short story I had to write in my English class. I didn't won, because my group thought that a other guy wrote a better story. Btw he wrote about a step sister and brother who stole their underwear and came together than...yeah, crap I just wanted to share it, because I put a lot of work in it, so I hope u guys like it, if I made any mistakes I'm sorry, English isn't my native language so yeah