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im bored so...reviews...huzzah. i'll try my best to help you with your oc, or point out the mary sue/gary stu in your oc

Wings of Fire OC reviews! Send me a form about your oc and I will cover it, giving you critique and praise! :3

In this book, I will judge characters that you have made for the warrior cats fandom! The ratings will be from 1 out of 15. The ratings will be my honest opinions, so please do not complain or feel too hurt from my responses. Like I've already said, they are my honest opinions. Cover art by Moonkitti

Featuring: -Aesthetics -Updates -Maybe Art -Random Things -Rants -Showcasing New OC's -Maybe Adoptables -Maybe OC Reviews -Fandom Related Trash -Maybe RP -Random Oneshots -Poems

So, I saw @Oaapha doing this and decided to make my own! I'm really excited to see your OC's and I can't wait to see what comes up. (Trolls allowed, just please down't spam. PLEASE)

I have recently acquired some free time and what better way to spend that time then by helping people? I've seen a lot of Mary Sues/Gary Stus during my time here on Earth and I decided it was time to stop this. All you need to do is fill out the form and I'll get to reviewing your OC. I'll also give out hints, tips, things to avoid etc. What are you waiting for? Send in your OC now!

💜Hi! I will review your OC and rate it. I will also give you tips on how to improve your character/characters.💜 I rate fairly based on my own opinion. No bullying!

‼️Read this description for rules/explanation‼️ Do you think that your OC might have some flaws that you would like to fix? Do you want to hear someone else's opinion on your OC? If so, this book is the perfect book for you!!! Simply fill out a form of your OC's information in the comment section (The form will be located in the first chapter/part) and if I see it, I'll review it in one of the next chapters of this very book. I will give out tips/opinions at the end. You don't have to change your OC, since I am just here to help. All I want to do is to be able to help you guys with making OCs. (Joke OCs are aloud too, BTW, but let me know at the very beginning of your comment if so) The last, and probably the most important rule. Please do not put already reviewed/already existing characters into your comment. Anyway, I'm done rambling, xD Can't wait to see all of your OCs!!! (BTW, no art shown in here is mine unless I say so.💞)

Basically, you send your OC in and I either yell at it for a long time or hug it. Oh, I'll probably also offer you some constructive criticism while I'm at it. Things to improve, and whatnot. I created a book similar to this on Quotev, but was overrun with desperate users begging me to review their (usually very bad) creepypastas. I've just seen books like these kicking off here in the WattyWings' community, so figured I may as well jump on the bandwagon once again! I may be a bit slow in getting back to you, but please bear with me. I am a busy person and have duties et cetera outside of here.

I'll put in a form in here and you can submit your OCs and I'll tell you if their a Mary Sue/Gary Stew or original!

Scripts from my upcoming podcast on writing, oc reviews, dramatic readings, and more!

Warning: I'm taking forever for some reason to get some of these but I'm trying please don't hurt me. Closed because I missed some reviews because of school and the fact that I lost the password to this account. Sorry to everyone that's awaiting a review, didn't mean to let you down! Fandoms I'll review: Percy Jackson Harry Potter Pokemon Marvel DC My little pony Steven Universe Original fandom Any questions you can ask on the first chapter but only on the first chapter please! Have a lovely day!

My new and improved wings of fire oc review book! I review both ocs and fantribes!

You got ocs? I got an opinion, as someone who's been making characters for years upon years, I'd like to offer my advice on your own to hopefully help a more interesting, and well rounded character.

Ever think your Oc might be an Mary Sue? Well, here's the right place to find out! I'll give you a word of advice to help improve your character((If their a MARY SUE.)), and give feedback of how original, how cliché and how un realistic your character is. DO NOT GET BUTTHURT BY THIS. These aremy opinions, and I'm just trying to help with making characters. //Oh, Yeah, I'm not apart of some fandoms, so I won't be able to review them.

[(temporarily) CLOSED] [you still can send me stuff, but... I really have not too much time at the moment, so it will take an eternity (and I'm unfortunately not exaggerating.) I'm really sorry.] In this book I will comment on your OCs and stories, try to give tips and will give them (the OCs, not the tips) a cryptic rating based on nothing but madness and coincidence. And another rating that you might actually understand. I do this as a hobby, because I can't find an open OC review book and now have decided that I will be the one who guides others to a treasure I cannot possess. Or something. ;P You can send me everything: from OCs from your original work, over Joke MarySues and OCs from various fandoms as listed below to other things you send me regardless. I know a lot about these fandoms: - Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit (J.R.R. Tolkien; books, movies) - Harry Potter (J.K. Rowling; books, a little bit movies) - Jurassic Park/Jurassic World (Michael Crichton; books, movies) I know a little/less about these fandoms: - Sherlock (Sir Arthur Conan Doyle; books) - A Hitchhikers guide to the Galaxy (Douglas Adams; books) - Inkheart/-blood/-death (Cornelia Funke; books) - Percy Jackson (Rick Riordan; books) And some others I forgot. Yes I live behind the moon and know basically nothing about modern pop-/geek-culture, but you can send me everything, I will try to understand it. What exactly I need, you will see in the first chapter, and after that it's up to you what happens in this book. Also, if I've got time I will draw your characters based on what you tell me about them. :D [I'm sorry if I make slight grammar/wording mistakes, English isn't my native language, but I try my best. If you find mistakes, please point them out in the comments and I will look how I can make it better. Thank you (: ] This book cover is brought to you by me, because I made this. :]

((my old account used to be @ssunnysideuppp)) a book where i review your original characters to the best of my ability //OPEN//