Ocreview Stories

So for the Telltale's TWD/TWD Saints and Sinners crossover idea I have in the Story au/idea adoption book, I have decided to make the story instead. For this book though, it's about showing my own character for the story, along with showing their gear, weapons, team, roles, feats, their homes and where they were when dead came back to life, how they met, the community they all live in, enemies they'll face (alongside with Clementine, AJ and their group), the walkers and different variant's they'll face etc.

[Currently open! I'm here to help you all out a bit with your ocs And also having others' opinions can be good to making a truly "original" character. So anyways, I'll be doing my best to keep the judging just to constructive criticism so it'll mainly be more on the advice side of things. And please don't take it any wrong way, I'm just doing this for fun! Well, I hope you enjoy!] -𝐅𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐬 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐥𝐲, 𝐑𝐚𝐧𝐝✿𝐦 [The fandoms I will be reviewing: (pm me if you would like to request a fandom to review) //Danganronpa (didn't get V3 yet so pleaseeee no spoilers-) //Pokémon //Furries (Please don't hate on them, one my besties in irl happen to be a furry, so please) //Original Fandoms //Marvel //Starwars //My Hero academia (Boku no Hero) //Demon slayer (Kimetsu no Yaiba) //Wof (Wings of fire) ]

Want to get a review or feedback on your OC? Want your OC to be featured here? Than look no further because I am doing OC reviews and here they are. If you want more information on submitting your OC for me to review or just want to see me review OCs then Open this book and read. Than maybe you might want to submit a OC to be reviewed too.

I will rate your OCs (original characters) and either be really harsh or not harsh at all. Probably the second one. IF YOU ARE READING THIS STORY ON ANY PLATFORM OTHER THAN WATTPAD, YOU ARE VERY LIKELY TO BE AT RISK OF A MALWARE ATTACK. IF YOU WISH TO READ THIS STORY IN ITS ORIGINAL, SAFE, FORM, PLEASE GO TO WATTPAD INSTEAD. THANK YOU.

Basically, you send your OC in and I either yell at it for a long time or hug it. Oh, I'll probably also offer you some constructive criticism while I'm at it. Things to improve, and whatnot. I created a book similar to this on Quotev, but was overrun with desperate users begging me to review their (usually very bad) creepypastas. I've just seen books like these kicking off here in the WattyWings' community, so figured I may as well jump on the bandwagon once again! I may be a bit slow in getting back to you, but please bear with me. I am a busy person and have duties et cetera outside of here.

rules and regulations for joining the oc competition

This is basically a review book. I'm not the most popular user (not by a long shot) but I'd like to help people make better OCs and stay away from the horror of Mary Sues! This book is not in any way meant to be a hate book, I just want to help you guys make better characters and therefore better stories. I will do the following fandoms. - Percy Jackson/Heroes of Olympus - Harry Potter - Warriors - MLP - The Lunar Chronicles - The Kane Chronicles - Steven Universe - Hunger Games - Divergent - Star Wars - Original Stories - Joke Sues If you have another fandom not listed, please ask me. I may have forgotten to list some. Also, if the character is from an original story, please explain the background/context of that story. I will rate your character based on what you've listed and suggest things to add to their profile or take away. I will not cuss at you for a Mary Sue but I will try and help you fix it! Anyways, either comment on one of the chapters or message me if you have a character you'd like me to review.g

‼️Read this description for rules/explanation‼️ Do you think that your OC might have some flaws that you would like to fix? Do you want to hear someone else's opinion on your OC? If so, this book is the perfect book for you!!! Simply fill out a form of your OC's information in the comment section (The form will be located in the first chapter/part) and if I see it, I'll review it in one of the next chapters of this very book. I will give out tips/opinions at the end. You don't have to change your OC, since I am just here to help. All I want to do is to be able to help you guys with making OCs. (Joke OCs are aloud too, BTW, but let me know at the very beginning of your comment if so) The last, and probably the most important rule. Please do not put already reviewed/already existing characters into your comment. Anyway, I'm done rambling, xD Can't wait to see all of your OCs!!! (BTW, no art shown in here is mine unless I say so.💞)

I accept comments only! I will review your OC in a chapter! Please send me Joke Sues, they're hilarious. There is a form inside the book.

OC reviews! You know the deal, I make a book, you send in your OCs, I grade them. I'll be nice, though! I won't yell, and I won't despise-I'm going to just stop talking now. But SERIOUSLY, send it in!!!

Feel free to submit!!! I'm in the process of making my own full class for a killing game, so I figured it might be fun to review other people's OCs and maybe make some friends to bounce ideas around with. (Also I wanna make sure that my OCs aren't like ones that already exist; if people want to I can post my OCs here at some point too for feedback)

1# just like my other book, I own no images in this book. Welcome to my Mary Sue book! This is where you can get your OC's reviewed. I will be doing these fandoms: -Miraculous Ladybug -Undertale (including AU's!) -Harry potter - Aikatsu -Naruto -Genshin Impact - Violet Evergarden -Demon slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba -Yandere Simulator -Obey me! -Project Sekai/Colorful stage -Love Live -Ensemble Stars!! Music!! -Your own universes! *EDIT 2021/05/24: I NOW ACCEPT JOKE-SUES!* 🌸 Thank you and have a great day/night! 🌸 @All rights reserved

𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐁𝐀𝐊𝐄𝐑𝐘 | OPEN where I review your oc's !

Eh, something I wanted to do, anyway, I will be fair with my review, I will not gatekeep, I will throw out some suggestions to possibly help it's up to you if you want to incorporate them into the character!

Where some kid over the internet gives you criticism over fictional characters because she is bored.

If you fill out the form, I'll rate your OC! It's as simple as that! I won't sugarcoat anything though.

Heya kiddos! Hit me up with them oc's and I'll tell you how I feel about them ~

A place to get your warrior cat ocs reviewed!