Pleasecritique Stories

What happens when Ash finds her friend beaten and bruised in the streets?

I need to practice my writing, so I'm making a book! this will be filled with short stories, whether it be fan stories or original stories. I may even take some requests...

The mind is a horrible thing to waste. Now when you have a mind like mine, where monsters come out to play and happy things come in bursts, it helps to write things down...