Pointers Stories

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Paul Zimmer, or as everyone else calls him Mister Bad Boy. He's the toughest of the toughest in school. But what happens when Mr. Bad Boy confesses his love for a total nerd? That must be against the Bad Boy Rules. "To be the toughest, you have to break hearts." But what if this heart isn't worth breaking and hurting, but it's worth loving and caring. Love isn't easy to have. There's obstacles. People in the way to stop love at all costs. What happens then? Is it all still worth it?

So I'm 18 and I like writing and reading, the latter I'm good at... Writing however I'm unsure of, I've written the start of (hopefully) a novel I have no idea where it's leading I just started writing and am starting to form ideas. Any pointers or feedback would be incredibly helpful you can email me at Daleaaronjohn@gmail.com

OPEN BUT REVIEWS WILL BE SLOW Want a story reviewed? Here's where to go! I will be brutally honest, but polite. I'm not here to tell you your story is terrible, but I'm here to tell you how to improve. I will not sugarcoat your flaws, but I will point out your strengths. If you don't want harsh criticism, this isn't the place for you.

Pretty much, explaining stuff (???) I guess- (I'm going to be wrong on some things but- idk, enjoy)

All roads lead to all gateways, can you see the pointers and find your cupid? Pride Acacia Felix knew she was damned forever when she met Aaron, a beautiful boy with a sweet mouth, but this isn't a story about her end. It's the beginning of all things that must come to an end. Or perhaps not...... NB. Every day we will be posting one chapter of this story. Do not steal my work.

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With these tips and pointers for life, you'll not only be able to live easier, but you actually might learn a thing or two. Enjoy :)

Pet peeves and annoying shit some authors do that turn me off COMPLETELY How to fix these mistakes.

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To prove a point to save a life is one thing, and helping the world is another, but taking the moment to help someone is truly horror in its own right. If the stakes aren't high, we still help them right, to prove a point to help yourself is rightfully bright, and bittersweet; even when a dog bites your head clean off.