Pollutedearth cerita

So, this is the first story I'm publishing. It's not that good, but might be of some relevance. It's a story I wrote for a competition. Maybe a bit angsty. I hope you will enjoy it. I'm not good with descriptions. So sorry about that.

Pollution has drained Earth. It is all just too much to handle. The pain. The fact that he was too scared to tell anybody. Not even his closest friends... One day, Earth doesn't wake up. The moon is confused and worried about his brother. He immediately decided to ask the expert on this type of thing: Astrodude. Luna got the worst news that a moon could get... Earth, his best friend, his BROTHER, could be dead, gone forever. The solar system quickly finds out, and Astrodude suggests that they should give Earth an Earthling tradition: a funeral. During Earth's funeral, Neptune recites a prophecy. About Earth... One minute Earth was in massive amounts of pain and had just been able to get to sleep, with life, and the next, he was in his old body as Proto Earth and his old best friend,Theia was stood next to him. He had no idea how this was even possible, but he was grateful for another chance. To change things. If he could... Follow Earth and the rest of the solar system as they try to figure out everything that was going on. Will Earth change a lot? Will he ever manage to get back home to his time? Let's see!