Qirin Stories

She's cursed to be a qirin, a magical beast. He is cured to be the Troll.

Hello so this story is still on progress. I will post a part of it. I know i dont have followers yet but if you read it please post a comment sth good or bad i just want to know that someone read it and how it was, if i should continua it or not. I think there will be a lot of grammar errors please forgive me im not an english speaker or writer :P still trying to do my best. well about the story is about a boy named Alex that is the rightful heir of the kingdom. He is KIRIN. Kirin is a mythologist animal that is born when a righteous ruler is born and that ruler is Alex.He wants to take back his throne and is helped by Meloiss his comrade.You can say is historical but not much couse there will be lots of love between them on the process :p. please if you read it let me now your opinion and sorry again for the grammar. :) And sorry for boring again is my first story hope you like it :)