Quillfacility Stories

[ I SUGGEST READING THE FIRST INSTALMENT OF THE SERIES BEFORE READING THIS ONE :) ] [ story somewhat inspired by the YouTube story series "Design" by SSTWL ] [ the story's in Sam's POV, hehe ] A 15 year old boy named Sam and his 21 year old sister, Jen, decide to explore and break into an abandoned facility known as "QuillEx Corp." after making a 1000$ bet on getting in without getting arrested. Since an article Jen found stated that the facility was abandoned, that means that QuillEx was actually abandoned...right?

[ NOTE: This is my first time writing an actual serious story, this story is mainly for practice so I can learn and correct my mistake in the future. This is purely a passion project I made solely because I was bored, will take constructive criticism as long as it is polite!! :3 ] [ story somewhat inspired by the YouTube story series "Design" by SSTWL ] [ the story's in Sam's POV, hehe ] A 15 year old boy named Sam and his 21 year old sister, Jen, decide to explore and break into an abandoned facility known as "QuillEx Corp." after making a 1000$ bet on getting in without getting arrested. Since an article Jen found stated that the facility was abandoned, that means that QuillEx was actually abandoned...right?