Realityxfiction Stories

What happens when the reader becomes a part of the story and falls in love with the character?

a fiction and reality overlap, the existence of "Honkai" disappeared from the world, that's what this world is. "The reality" becomes one with "Fiction", there is no point denying it. Meet John Michael Augustine, a young boy from an American native lives on Philippines, due to personal reasons. He lives as an ordinary boy who likes to play honkai and is willing to spend a large sum of money for Kiana, one day- a certain snow haired beautiful girl transferred to his class. Wanna know next? okay, long story short- John is a simp because he's gay and ugly asf. Just read the story and gimme some corrections and ideas on how to write it. Ps: I did not mean he is a simp, I'm just feeling salty right now.