Redback Stories

So this was my English assessment from 2014. It's an intervention after a short story called 'The Red-Backed Spiders'. This features the draft and final copy, and I have attached the Original Short Story at the back.

(NOTE: English is not my primary language.) Hey, if you're reading this, and wondering what's Spider-Man: Webs of Freedom, it's a fanfiction that I'm writing yet never released because of my inexperience, it's also a MUGEN Project (check my Youtube channel) that I'm currently working on. this is a one-shot to practice my writing skills. as well as being my first fanfiction. anyways, here's a one-shot about a crossover ship I like, Redback (AKA Spider-Man/Peter Parker X Ruby Rose) in the Webs of Freedom universe. (Note: This Peter Parker is different than the typical Peter Parker that you all know, so please take note of this.)