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338 Stories

  • Dinosaur Reserve: The Game (Revised Edition) by AnimalX23
    AnimalX23
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    There is something missing from our world... the amazing animals that time has left behind. but what if we could bring them back? what if extinction didn't have to be forever? Inspired by Prehistoric Park, This Video game concept sends you, the player back in time on a safari with a difference to rescue the mighty dinosaurs from the brink of extinction, to bring them to the safety of the present and give them a second chance. Then it is up to you to build the greatest zoo on Earth, where the past meets the present. Welcome to Dinosaur Reserve! (Revised Edition)
  • Accidentally (Revised) by alyssamd394
    alyssamd394
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    This is the revised and slightly rewritten version of Accidentally. He is dangerous; living in a world of guns, drugs, money laundering, and as a high ranking member of an organized crime family. Luciano "Luca" Langello is Arturo's eldest son. Luca has already taken over as Don. He's cold, heartless, and just plain rude or sarcastic to everyone besides this particular girl. She is innocent; completely oblivious to the crime around her. Her parents sheltered her from all the bad in the world. Liliana Roxelle Dubois is the daughter of a French Duke. She is the sweetest person you could ever find. An upset Liliana rushed out of the restaurant, she slams into a dark handsome man. Is it going to be love at first sight? Or is he going to make her regret even leaving the restaurant?
  • He Wasn't a Jerk In The End (He Wasn't a Jerk #4) by onedirectiion_
    onedirectiion_
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    *Fourth and FINAL book in the HWAJ series* Louis Tomlinson, now twenty-six, has become a self-centered billionaire five years later after they have broken up. And by they, I mean One Direction and the ultimate powe couple "Loria". Within the five years of Victoria's absence many aspects of Louis' life took a turn for the worse. Louis had become a drug addict, went to rehab and back several times, and started his own company that created millions up until his tragic downfall. Coming out of One Direction the most successful, he sees no need in ever reconciling with people from his past - especially his ex-band members. Victoria Green, now twenty-five years old still bares the guilt of breaking her promise to Louis Tomlinson. Since she had never returned home after a month as she promised, she thought it would be best if Cheryl, Henry and herself were one happy family living in Southern England. With Cheryl now Henry's adoptive mother, Victoria sees Cheryl as more of a mother-figure than a friend. Victoria's life couldn't be more intact than it is now. After the opportunity of a lifetime, and one chance encounter, Louis and Victoria are thrown together in an impossible situation with no solution. Tensions rise - in more way than one -, feelings resurface, and memories from the past haunt relationships in the final book of the "He Wasn't a Jerk" series. "Oh and Vic," Louis paused, looked over his shoulder with a vexed look, "I stopped chasing you when you started running."
  • Memories Of You by kittellize
    kittellize
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    There he is, a perfect prince for me. Of course, villains wouldn't be out of the picture. They will always be there to ruin my perfectly beautiful story. So as the problems that will give me hardship. But who knows that the people whom I really know will going to turn my world into chaos for what will happen after we all settle down. Memories of You ©copyright All Right Reserve
  • Entitled to Murder: A Murder Mystery Book Club Novella by WriterADHay
    WriterADHay
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    Bookworm and recently widowed, Lucy Hobbs has lived a sheltered life. The only danger she has ever faced was turning the pages of a murder mystery novel. All of that is about to change. It's Halloween, Lucy's favourite time of year, but it's more than just a holiday-it's her grandfather Alfred's 87th birthday. After months of grieving, this is the one thing she has been looking forward to. But, little does Lucy know she is walking into a family feud, a lost sheep, and murder. On the day of Alfred's Will reading, Lucy learns of some unexpected changes that cause her to look at the events of the birthday party in a new light. Can Lucy figure out who the murderer is before they strike again?
  • Pee Mak by mainedcmFP
    mainedcmFP
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    เข้าใจเพียงว่า ฉันยังรู้ว่าคุณเข้าใจใช่ไหม? :) A Hammabol Sorkesa Revised Edition. All rights reserved. 2014 (Pee Mak) Highest Rank: #554 in Adventure 02.09.18 #52 in Revised 02.04.21 #16 in mariomaurer 05.24.21
  • Hansel and Gretel's Fractured Life by xmermaidbonesx
    xmermaidbonesx
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    A boy named Hansel and A girl named Gretel. Same two kids, same evil step mother, same rendering father, same candy house, and same evil cannibalistic witch. What happens though when the same two sweet innocent children set a vendetta against everyone evil who has crossed their paths? I welcome you to read the REAL story of Hansel and Gretel.
  • "Behind The Glass" (REVISED) by DaringDoombringer
    DaringDoombringer
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    Warning: Contains mild profanity and descriptions of body horror. Could be triggering to those with paranoia. (This takes place roughly a few months after the events of TidesOfChaos. This has been revised for continuity and lore purposes.) Sometimes, it's best not look out your window at night. You never know who, or what could be watching. Even if its a familiar face. Inspired by the MLP Grimdark "Let Her In" and The Mandela Catalogue.
  • I Am From ~ Poem by MaddogAce
    MaddogAce
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    Whooooooooo's ready for some really depressing poetry, eh? Ehhh? Eeeeeeehhhhh? Ok, fine. Prepare yourselves for a truly depressing poem.
  • Books Review!!!!! by lovelyhoe__
    lovelyhoe__
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    I decided to to do books reviews because their are some really good books out there but there are also some horrible books out there
  • Basic Guide: Valkyrie Crusade (Revised) by miraesakura
    miraesakura
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    Self Explanatory. simple guidebook on some things in the mobile app game Valkyrie Crusade. Originally owned by Nubee Tokyo and was sold to MyNet Inc as of 2016. Do take note that these are the methods on how i do things in game. there could be other ways. if you do not prefer these methods, consult the wikia on how to do things in methods you prefer. I will update content on whatever they release. Game is available for iOs in the app store and Android in Google play. website (current owner): mynet.co.jp/english website (original owner): http://nubee.com/en/ wiki: valkyriecrusade.wikia.com REVISION LOG (What changed): 8/21/18: * Title Changed * Elemental Hall and Witch Gate pages deleted. 10/25/19: * Title Edited * Added more tags 10/3/19 * Removed the page: Author's friend code since i lost access to my account forever.
  • Tail Spin (Revised version) by Sushifry123
    Sushifry123
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    The revised version of the beloved Tailspin story. After college graduation, Christian gets a job at a coffee shop where he catches the attention of a killer vampire, his brother-in-law's attractive best werewolf friend, and the occasional visits from his ex-zombie boyfriend. What will Christian do? Mild BL story. Don't like, don't read. Let me know if you guys prefer this version over the original. I am mixing up the characterization. Criticism and praise encouraged to better my writing skill.
  • lemons by Amoridere_Hall
    Amoridere_Hall
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    This poem isn't about literal lemons but we know what lemons might look like.
  • Passages (POETRY) by Eyna_KittKoot
    Eyna_KittKoot
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    This is a revised edition of my old book POETRY. All poems from my old book will be edited and put in this. New poems will be added. Format will be better.
  • Revised story of The Little Mermaid by louisseloweslowis
    louisseloweslowis
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    What if the Mermaid Princess Ariel you know, is way too far from the real story? Everything in this story is an opposite story from our childhood. A plus-sized Ariel in the world of enchantment and an unexpected family connections that will blow your mind.