Romancfe Stories

Hi! So this is a rough draft of a romance novella I'm working on and I just want feedback/comments!! let me know what y'all think. the title and character names, basically everything is up for change. Basically it's a academic rivals to lovers story, if this first rough draft chapter gets a good response i'll post the next part. If you have any ideas for names or basically anything, let me know!

Jupiter struggles to balance everything in her life as a young adult. Relationships, friends, money, time... And the coffee shop that she bought on a whim with someone she no longer speaks to three years ago. All seems to be going well, until that ex-friend comes back with no warning... Big wip, but I plan on working more on writing with newfound free time and motivation.