tammmyea
Help, its for my audition tomorrow, and honestly i never write any story, and this is my first time and people somehow trusted me, and i need ur opinin ASAP, im beggin'... its due tomorrow and i didn't really confident about the ending, which is year 2050, its doesn't sounds good.. so please read and comment freely. Thank you
Ps. Im sorry for the grammar, I haven't revise any of it, and im still learning English language for i am from indonesia. That's all, thank you