Secondperspective Stories

The first draft of a play I wrote in 5 days for a writing competition. The whole plot is being changed but I would like some reviews so any comments are appreciated. The story will be marked as completed until a new draft is ready. Content Warnings: Murder

A simple misunderstanding. It seems small...almost harmless. Almost. It brought you to a place you used to love. Ha. Too bad it won't let you escape. At least not with your sanity intact. Good luck...

Ever tried being the Jester's kid? It's not easy, at least he says so. Alone in the world he sits and drowns in the shadow of his father. It only takes a click to save him, listen to his story, become his friend, and learn a little more...