ArahBruhilda
Everything that you read here are just my opinion about the stories that I read. I don't intend to offend anybody especially the person who wrote the story.
If you are the author, you have a choice to take it constructively and improve your story or you can get offended and get back at me.
But overall, I just wanna share my opinion and hopefully I can help you improve your story.
PS: I'm not a pro but I have a taste.
Thank you! Peace!