Shit-writing Stories

hI so last year i wrote a horror story for an english assignment. i reread it recently and realized it needed severe fixing. i might change character names (as the names were hella basic) i certainly will change the main character(s) introductions (in general and to each other) and i will certainly make it better fit my writing style. hopefully you'll be patient with me on this painfully slow process. oH and there might be smut because why not :> (also the cover is a picture of me as a kid so just- ignore that its all i could find-)

They came for the sun, the laughs, the vacation. They stayed for the secrets, the betrayals... and the terror. JJ and Mikey thought they knew their friends-Carrie, Banana Kid, Pinky, Buu. They were wrong. One morning, everything is off. Cryptic notes. Their stuff tampered with. A feeling that someone-or something-is watching. Trust shatters. Paranoia blooms. And the line between friend and enemy blurs. By the end of this vacation, nothing-and no one-will ever be the same. Are you brave enough to find out what happens next? Rankings: #109 in Random #1 in Maizen #28 in jj #35 in mikey