Shittyspelling cerita

I write these bc I have too much time on my hands

this was made when I was 12. I decided to post it here so other people can bully the crap outta me when I was twelve for not only OOC characters, but shitty storytelling as well. I read it and I hated it with a burning passion. here you go, eat this up and spit it back out. Please.