Shortstorymadefromasong Stories

I made a Short story based on a song. Heres a quick look. "I hear the music from my hometown. Am I finally returning? ("Oh, Captain, let's make a deal. Where we both say the thing we both really feel...") ... "I feel scared..." Bubbles escape my mouth, am I underwater?" That was a small part of it! BTW the song I used for insperation is, Ship in a Bottle by fin.