Shortstpry Stories

Hey guys. I was talking to my girlfriend and I made up a quote. She said she liked it so I decided to make more. Long story shirt she thinks I have a talent and I want to test that theory. In this book, I'm going to post all the quotes I have come up with and all the future ones and I would REALLY appreciate some feed back. And please, be honest? Thanks guys! Love you all!

there is a girl named kyra, she was a beautiful girl, kind, and helpful.Since 5 years old Kyra lived just by his fayher. Because her mother already died. Kyra was feeling lost. And strangely Kyra always not allowed to get into the laboratory where his father work. Then one by one incident ensued. Kyra is very confused. Kyra can not do anything other than run away. His father is obsessed with dolls. so he want make Kyra like a doll. And also Kyra feel like her doll glanced at her. Kyra is the one who can make her family back