Juliethefurball
here it is! the rewrite!
Nolan was some ordinary kid, not smart, not stupid, just average.
He always wanted to be an astronaut, but kids loved to bully him for chasing such and out of reach goal, eventually giving him the nickname, Notme.
Then MIRA came into the picture.
Along with his friend aiden, aka Detective, they recruited him into a team of astronauts. They sent him on a journey to a planet called imatus.
Many people died on that mission. Two alien imposters infiltrated the skeld, but spared Notme and Detective.
One of the two proved to be the love of his life.
(There are some concepts from Steven Universe)