Stillimproving Stories

Science fiction,adventure,action,drama,comedy,fantasy,romance,isekai

I'm new to this app so my story may not be perfect but I have tried and I hope you all find this interesting. This is a horror book so it gets more interesting as it goes on. Only chapter 1 is completed. Enjoy :)

So, obviously, this is an art book. Do you think it needs more improvements? Read to find out! [P.S. It's way better than before-]