Storydevelopement Stories

sooo this is a new story about a character named "Pandora"......and its my first story so its not perfect. this is story of fairytail's surprising visitor, pandora with an exceed neo, he is pandoda's only friend til they come across fairytail. what they dont know is shes a shadow dragon slayer and has dragon's blood in her veins. who knows what will happen with with ANOTHER dragon slayer. DISCLAIMER: I do NOT own fairytail. I only own pandora and neo. Any music i use isnt mine eather.

This is info for a story I plan to write! plz give constructive criticism! I would like that!

These are a bunch of my brain storm notes for a story (or animation possibly) that at the moment is called 'The Dragon Known as Husk Academy' (the name may very well change). So any and all information about characters, and the series, are going to be located in the chapters of this brain storm book. If you have feed back, leave it in the comments! (keep in mind that constructive feed back is prefered). Also, if you're interested in the story, and want to help with it's developement, please pm me! 6th-he-the-that's all folks!

This is a dump for my story/comic/animation ideas! As you can tell the current working title for this stuff is Seers Code! So yeah! All I really want, is feedback on characters and, story ideas! So that's all! Bye!